When I met "Me". . .

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When I met "Me". . .

Postby JuVy » Thu Jun 14, 2007 3:17 am


Just beneath the wall
Along with the corners of my mind
Behind the bars of lies

When hopes tag along
And tears fall freely
Into an ocean of uncertainty and longing

Beside me is a lonely girl
Trapped in the crime of infidelity
Still willing to give

A bleeding heart
Patches can be made
But scars live long

She mourns for fairness
Asks for some understanding
And be loved in return

I've been so passionated in writing this
Not knowing
This very girl in the story is Me...

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Postby Arale » Tue Jul 03, 2007 9:33 am

Your poem is very nice and deep! I like this small poem. Congratulation! Nicest post of July 2007!^^


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Postby lluviax » Wed Aug 01, 2007 11:25 pm

It's beautiful

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Postby maksoora » Sun Aug 05, 2007 11:56 am

great feelings u could express it

am watting for new from u

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