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**DESIRE**

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**DESIRE**

Postby MONEM » Wed Jul 04, 2007 6:52 am

The Desire
She came from the bar with a new guy that she want to make love with him .he told her that he will go to the market to buy a drink .She went to her bed lonely thinking about her life her x husband and how she is lonely ..
She didn’t have sex since along time she need someone to take care of her she need love ..
She was thinking that she can’t forget her x husband because she loves him more than every thing in the world but her desire is stronger than her.
She wear a red night wear and she put kindles waiting for the new guy . she was very exciting she didn’t make love since her husband left her but she also felt guilty ..
She knows that she is wrong .. she cries a lot in her bed.
Wait wait she stopped crying She heard a sound in her door it could be a thief? She didn’t give that guy any keys!!
She closed the lights and her eyes too…
And the sound come closer and closer.
He is in the bed now he is trying to touch her oh he is trying to hold her .. ohhh she is very scare but she didn’t move
He start to kiss her hold her and she felt very good she felt love .Do you think that because her desire? Maybe something else!! She hold him without seeing his face without any single word she said crying I love you!!! Oh my God she know the guy she recognize him .. he was her x husband .. she finally look to his face and his beautiful tears and he asked for who you are wearing this? You are so beautiful .. she said for you baby..
The man on the bar never come.Do you know why?? Because he is a friend to her husband and her husband know about the bar story but he decide to forgive her like she decide to forgive him..
Who said the desire is stronger than love and forgiveness!!
Written By Monem :D
By the way its my first story :D
4July,07
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!
great minds have purposes other have wishes.
With all love
MONEM:)
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Postby Ms.A.Z » Fri Jul 13, 2007 11:49 am

Hi,

at 1st I was thinking where the story is going to??!!! but i liked the ending...


Nice one :wink:
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Postby MONEM » Mon Jul 16, 2007 10:52 am

:) Thanks Ms.A.Z
you are the only one who reply i thought that my story is bad :cry:
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!
great minds have purposes other have wishes.
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Postby Ms.A.Z » Mon Jul 16, 2007 3:53 pm

Enjoyed what you wrote :wink:
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Postby InLove » Fri Jul 27, 2007 6:01 am

She is insufficient in sex
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Postby MONEM » Sat Jul 28, 2007 9:56 am

:) Thanks Ms.A.Z

InLove, at the end she is Satisfied with her husband
only :wink:
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great minds have purposes other have wishes.
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