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A desire of love.

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A desire of love.

Postby Oriani » Sat Jul 28, 2007 6:29 pm

I am the girl who loves you more

I am the girl who wants to give you all

Why can't you see what I feel?

Just come to me...see me... love me...



Oh! God.. I can't wait for him to love me.. Is that so difficult?

As the time goes by, my soul dies

But when I think of you, It is so great the way I wake up again, my soul, my body, my everything.



Your love will be my spirit

Your love will be in my body

But there is something that I am pretty sure,

That your love will be always MINE!!!

I LOVE YOU.. just you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Postby Vega » Sun Jul 29, 2007 5:03 am

What a nice poem! :P :P ..I wish somebody said that to me.


Rasheed wrote:It's remind me poems of Omar Ibn Al-Fared ... or Omar Al- Khyam..


I've got a little book of Al-Khyam's rubai (or rubayi, I mean quatrains, but in russian lang.)
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Postby Oriani » Sun Jul 29, 2007 12:02 pm

I'm glad that you liked it, guys!! I wrote it 4 days ago.. ( I'm taking a poetry seminar) and Now I write poems from time to time!! And I wish someone said the same to me, too, Xkalibur.

Rasheed: Yes, it's similar, as I see. Maybe because everyone has those feelings that need to be written!!!
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Postby Oriani » Tue Jul 31, 2007 8:17 pm

Rasheed wrote:
As the time goes by, my soul dies

But when I think of you, It is so great the way I wake up again, my soul, my body, my everything.



Your love will be my spirit


It's good when you see that some people still believe in the romance in current dark age..


Yeah.. and I know that person doesn't feel the same for me! :cry:
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Postby lluviax » Wed Aug 01, 2007 10:06 pm

Hello Oriani
It's very nice poem, and I think that you have much talent.
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Sufistic.

Postby Bambang » Sun Aug 05, 2007 4:27 am

This poem is sufistic.

I like it.
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Postby (((Edu))) » Mon Aug 06, 2007 7:11 pm

Oriani,

Nice words.

Congratulations. :!:
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Postby Oriani » Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:29 pm

(((Edu))) wrote:Oriani,

Nice words.

Congratulations. :!:


Oh, how sweet. Thanks!
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Postby babara » Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:36 pm

Nice poem again!! :D

Maybe because everyone has those feelings that need to be written!!!


Yeah, you're right.Everyone have those feeling to express but for me sometimes it's hard to say so can do only keep it.
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Postby babara » Wed Aug 08, 2007 4:14 pm

Rasheed wrote:
babara wrote:Everyone have those feeling to express but for me sometimes it's hard to say so can do only keep it.


It's too hard to hid that kind of feelings, anyway your feelings will appear whatever you try to put the masks…

If you can hide your love, really you are so powerful.


Yeah, you're right. :) I know it's hard to keep that feeling and I am not so powerful to do that forever but I am not so brave to show it directly also... :?
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