EnglishClub
Home Learn English Teach English MyEnglishClub Home Learn English Teach English MyEnglishClub

Please note that these ESL Forums are NOT part of MyEnglishClub. To post at these ESL Forums please register ↑ first.

Probably a Sick Heart.

Add your poems, essays and short stories here. Please do not post work by other writers.

Moderators: Vega, EC

Probably a Sick Heart.

Postby Oriani » Wed Aug 01, 2007 7:46 pm

Teach me how can I mend a broken heart
Teach me how to forget all of your promises
Or were all of your pormises false?
Were they not true?

Facts... Words.. Pictures, People say something that you didn't confess
The confession I needed to hear
The truth that I deserved to know.

Is it fair that I have to find out by myself?
Is it not better If you just be honest with me?
Yes.. sometimes we need to know it by ourselves, but how much painful it is.

Oh , God... Oh, world...I know this is a magic life
But how can I make magic mine
If I feel my magic is lost...faith... love.

How can I mend my broken heart?
How long my heart will be sick? Is there any cure?
I just can't see beyond the truth, beyond what my heart says but what it hurts me.

How I can mend a broken heart...
User avatar
Oriani
Miss EnglishClub.com 2007
Miss EnglishClub.com 2007
 
Posts: 2061
Joined: Fri Feb 18, 2005 6:44 pm
Status: English Teacher

Postby lluviax » Wed Aug 01, 2007 11:32 pm

Hello Oriani :)
I think that your poem is very beautiful and deep.
lluviax
Member
 
Posts: 8
Joined: Mon Jul 09, 2007 10:37 pm
Location: Costa Rica

Postby maksoora » Sun Aug 05, 2007 12:20 pm

Hi Oriani


Do u know my neke name (maksoor_alkatter)what mean??

arabic name mean(Broken heart).

i like ur poem coz about broken heart

am waitting for new from u

thank u
maksoora
Silver Member
 
Posts: 36
Joined: Thu Aug 02, 2007 1:52 pm
Location: Dubai

Postby Snowy* » Sun Aug 05, 2007 4:36 pm

hi Oriani
who broke your heart dearling??



also you maksoora who broke your heart??


why everybady have broken heart??
I hope your resones not a man >> :evil: :evil:
'couse that's makeing me crazy.. :twisted: :twisted:
User avatar
Snowy*
Silver Member
 
Posts: 82
Joined: Sun Jun 10, 2007 10:18 am

Postby maksoora » Sun Aug 05, 2007 8:30 pm

Snowy* wrote:hi Oriani
who broke your heart dearling??



also you maksoora who broke your heart??


why everybady have broken heart??
I hope your resones not a man >> :evil: :evil:
'couse that's makeing me crazy.. :twisted: :twisted:


dont worry snowy its just nake.
maksoora
Silver Member
 
Posts: 36
Joined: Thu Aug 02, 2007 1:52 pm
Location: Dubai

Postby Oriani » Sun Aug 05, 2007 9:31 pm

Snowy* wrote:hi Oriani
who broke your heart dearling??



also you maksoora who broke your heart??


why everybady have broken heart??
I hope your resones not a man >> :evil: :evil:
'couse that's makeing me crazy.. :twisted: :twisted:


Someone who doesn't (and didn't) deserve my love... You can find a pic of his in the forum.. I don't remember where I posted it. I think at the Confessions topic.
User avatar
Oriani
Miss EnglishClub.com 2007
Miss EnglishClub.com 2007
 
Posts: 2061
Joined: Fri Feb 18, 2005 6:44 pm
Status: English Teacher

Postby Oriani » Sun Aug 05, 2007 9:32 pm

maksoora wrote:Hi Oriani


Do u know my neke name (maksoor_alkatter)what mean??

arabic name mean(Broken heart).

i like ur poem coz about broken heart

am waitting for new from u

thank u


Oh, I didn't know it, in fact, I just know one of two words in Arabic.
User avatar
Oriani
Miss EnglishClub.com 2007
Miss EnglishClub.com 2007
 
Posts: 2061
Joined: Fri Feb 18, 2005 6:44 pm
Status: English Teacher

Postby maksoora » Tue Aug 07, 2007 12:40 pm

, I didn't know it, in fact, I just know one of two words in Arabic.[/quote]

if u want i will learn u Arabic ekeke
maksoora
Silver Member
 
Posts: 36
Joined: Thu Aug 02, 2007 1:52 pm
Location: Dubai

Postby babara » Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:21 pm

I remember it and as I told in your space nice poem,dear.. but not a real matter ,right? :)
User avatar
babara
Platinum Member
 
Posts: 506
Joined: Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:29 pm
Location: Thailand

Postby Oriani » Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:39 pm

babara wrote:I remember it and as I told in your space nice poem,dear.. but not a real matter ,right? :)


It is, unfortunately :(
User avatar
Oriani
Miss EnglishClub.com 2007
Miss EnglishClub.com 2007
 
Posts: 2061
Joined: Fri Feb 18, 2005 6:44 pm
Status: English Teacher


Return to Creative Writing

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 6 guests