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i need a poem...

Postby Israeli » Tue Dec 04, 2007 4:11 pm

i need a poem that deal with the subject of conflict.

the conflict supposed to be conflict if to hidING pepole/save people from death or don't to take a risk (to endanger oneself).

i will very happy if you can help me to find or write song about it.


please, is very important!!!
thank... and i hope that my request is clear... :D
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Re: i need a poem...

Postby Krisi » Wed Dec 05, 2007 2:58 pm

Israeli wrote:i need a poem that deal with the subject of conflict.

the conflict supposed to be conflict if to hidING pepole/save people from death or don't to take a risk (to endanger oneself).

i will very happy if you can help me to find or write song about it.


please, is very important!!!
thank... and i hope that my request is clear... :D


Here I composed this for you...

I LOVE THEE

I love the tree that sways with the wind,
I love the bird that chirps with a tune,
I love the flower that smiles with the sun,
I love the person that lies within...
Oh, I so love thee...


May I know why do you need it? I could look for more if you want me to... :wink:
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Postby Vega » Sat Dec 08, 2007 2:20 pm

Saving people? Ok, here's the lyrics to a song from Mattafix:

LIVING DARFUR

See the nation through the people's eyes
See the tears that flow like rivers from the skies
Where it seems there are only borderlines
Where others turn and sigh
You shall rise (x2)
There's disaster in your past
Boundaries in your path
What do you desire will lift you higher ?
You don't have to be extraordinary, just forgiving
And those who never heard cries,
You shall rise (x2)
And look forward the skies
Where others fail, you prevail in time
You shall rise

You may never know, if you lay low lay low (x3)

Sooner or later we must try ... Living

You may never know, if you lay low lay low (x4)

See the nation through the people eye's
See tears that flow like rivers from the skies
Where it seems there are only borderlines
Where others turn and sigh

You shall rise (x4)

You may never know, if you lay low lay low (x4)

Sooner or later we must try... LIVING





PS
Hey Krisi, nice poem.. :D
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Postby Krisi » Sat Dec 08, 2007 2:30 pm

Xkalibur wrote:Saving people? Ok, here's the lyrics to a song from Mattafix:

LIVING DARFUR

See the nation through the people's eyes
See the tears that flow like rivers from the skies
Where it seems there are only borderlines
Where others turn and sigh
You shall rise (x2)
There's disaster in your past
Boundaries in your path
What do you desire will lift you higher ?
You don't have to be extraordinary, just forgiving
And those who never heard cries,
You shall rise (x2)
And look forward the skies
Where others fail, you prevail in time
You shall rise

You may never know, if you lay low lay low (x3)

Sooner or later we must try ... Living

You may never know, if you lay low lay low (x4)

See the nation through the people eye's
See tears that flow like rivers from the skies
Where it seems there are only borderlines
Where others turn and sigh

You shall rise (x4)

You may never know, if you lay low lay low (x4)

Sooner or later we must try... LIVING





PS
Hey Krisi, nice poem.. :D


Thank you, Xkalibur. :oops:
(I was worrying so much and made it right away when I saw his post.) :oops:
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Postby Vega » Sat Dec 08, 2007 4:00 pm

krisi wrote:Thank you, Xkalibur. :oops:
(I was worrying so much and made it right away when I saw his post.) :oops:


It's very kind of you helping people, you're not like those rude and ice-hearted girls, you're really WOW. I can only admire you. :wink: ... :P
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Postby Krisi » Sat Dec 08, 2007 4:06 pm

Xkalibur wrote:
krisi wrote:Thank you, Xkalibur. :oops:
(I was worrying so much and made it right away when I saw his post.) :oops:


It's very kind of you helping people, you're not like those rude and ice-hearted girls, you're really WOW. I can only admire you. :wink: ... :P


:oops:
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Postby Israeli » Sun Dec 09, 2007 2:12 pm

thanks... but i don't understand how does is contact to my request... :D

please..
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Postby Krisi » Sun Dec 09, 2007 2:19 pm

Israeli wrote:thanks... but i don't understand how does is contact to my request... :D

please..


I don't understand what you mean...it seems you become younger now than (when you posted your initial entry here) 5 days ago...because of the way you express yourself now. :lol:

Sorry.
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Postby Israeli » Sun Dec 09, 2007 6:20 pm

:D

well...


someone can please please please help me?
i realy need it..
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Postby Krisi » Sun Dec 09, 2007 9:47 pm

Israeli wrote::D

well...


someone can please please please help me?
i realy need it..


I think it would be better to....

OFFER IT UP! (Someone loves you!)

Goodluck!

-krisi-
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