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Postby gem » Mon Dec 10, 2007 2:52 pm

Hi Israeli... i hope this can help..i got this from my daughter's book...she got a sort of poem collection...


WHY SPEAK DEATH

Why speak death whose face
You've never seen nor traced
The black velvet of its mantle
The white glow of its skull?

Why speak of death in terms
Of color as if its germ
Were part of your design
Mere mortal in your prime?

Yet it is a thing
Within the gushing spring
In the flowering of dawn which seems
A door to an unknown dream;

Say it lurks in a rosebud
Still untouched by gust
Rich with myths and fragrance
A token of gesture in silence;

Say it yawns in all
That is lovely like eyeball
Drunk and dazzled by life
Or by weariness of strife:

Death is a just a toothless
Child sucking milk from the breast
Of fancy and desire. It lolls
Secure, nameless until you call.


I hope this can help you...if this doesn't fit enough for your requirement.....just tell me i can send another one...

Have a nice day ! :D
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Postby denvinbo » Tue Dec 11, 2007 3:53 am

I'll write your name
To all the stars
And I know in you
That there're many aspiration
'Cause you can't see the sun
When you are standing on the ground

But the ray of hopes
Will never dissolve into nothingness
'Cause I'm near you
To bring your blue
Let's believe in miracle
'Cause tomorrow will never wilt
You and me in a dream
Only us.

Have you ever know that
The sky is full of stars
Have you ever sing loudly
many people 'round you
Do they see the love
That it makes you happy.

Do you know on this world
I'm the one still love you
Bring many hopes
With many things to say
But you'd never know me
If you saw the sun.

Want to be near when you smile
Want to see the wind
Glide past your hair
The singing I wrote for you
Hope you will sing it in future.

The sea of love
Still makes you faraway
Many night
Drizzling rain's sound was gently
Hope the sky help me once
Make you know 'bout my love.
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Postby Krisi » Tue Dec 11, 2007 4:41 am

denvinbo wrote:I'll write your name
To all the stars
And I know in you
That there're many aspiration
'Cause you can't see the sun
When you are standing on the ground

But the ray of hopes
Will never dissolve into nothingness
'Cause I'm near you
To bring your blue
Let's believe in miracle
'Cause tomorrow will never wilt
You and me in a dream
Only us.

Have you ever know that
The sky is full of stars
Have you ever sing loudly
many people 'round you
Do they see the love
That it makes you happy.

Do you know on this world
I'm the one still love you
Bring many hopes
With many things to say
But you'd never know me
If you saw the sun.

Want to be near when you smile
Want to see the wind
Glide past your hair
The singing I wrote for you
Hope you will sing it in future.

The sea of love
Still makes you faraway
Many night
Drizzling rain's sound was gently
Hope the sky help me once
Make you know 'bout my love.


This is lovely and sweet! Did you make this?
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Postby denvinbo » Tue Dec 11, 2007 12:22 pm

Yes. you're right. I made that, 'cause I feel sorry for all the handicap people :cry: .I was thinkin' all the morning and write on this page, so that all the people who have the same love as me can read and experience. :cry:
I also have many other poem. If anyone want to read, I will write for you.
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Postby Krisi » Tue Dec 11, 2007 12:41 pm

denvinbo wrote:Yes. you're right. I made that, 'cause I feel sorry for all the handicap people :cry: .I was thinkin' all the morning and write on this page, so that all the people who have the same love as me can read and experience. :cry:
I also have many other poem. If anyone want to read, I will write for you.


Please do so. Thank you.
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Postby yali » Tue Dec 11, 2007 2:22 pm

Hi Denvinbo
It's really a wonderful and touching poem and I love it. Why not to post more your poems to share with other amateur poets like us or you're a professional poet?? I also like to compose poems but they're often short. Thanks for sharing anyway.
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Postby Israeli » Wed Dec 12, 2007 7:05 am

It's really wonderful poems...but it isn't what i mean...

thanks for trying
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Postby Krisi » Wed Dec 12, 2007 12:56 pm

ohad wrote:למה בדיוק אתה מתכוון, אחי?אולי אני יכול לעזור?
טוב לראות פה עוד מישהו מישראל!



Is this a poem? You might want to share it...
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Postby denvinbo » Wed Dec 12, 2007 1:37 pm

Thanks for all the praise :D . I'd like to write the other poem, but I don't have anytime now, so...Could everyone wait for tomorrow :lol: , so that I can write so coherent and interesting :D :lol: :) :P
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Postby Krisi » Wed Dec 12, 2007 2:46 pm

ohad wrote:
krisi wrote:
ohad wrote:למה בדיוק אתה מתכוון, אחי?אולי אני יכול לעזור?
טוב לראות פה עוד מישהו מישראל!



Is this a poem? You might want to share it...

Haha...that's not a poem,just a few words in Hebrew.


:?: :roll: :?:
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