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CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)

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CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)

Postby denvinbo » Wed Dec 26, 2007 5:05 am

HI :D :D :D :D
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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)

Postby Vega » Fri Dec 28, 2007 8:32 am

Hi. What this topic is about? or About what this topic? (I'm not sure about the grammar, anyway hope you'll get the meaning)
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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)

Postby Krisi » Sun Jan 27, 2008 12:30 pm

Hi Denvinbo!
No word... write something please... :lol: :P :lol: :P :wink:
click --> Happy Valentine!
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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)

Postby denvinbo » Sun Jan 27, 2008 12:56 pm

Suggest me something to write.....about hot news or entertainment.....
Hey! I'm stuck! Get me out!

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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)

Postby Krisi » Sun Jan 27, 2008 1:59 pm

denvinbo wrote:Suggest me something to write.....about hot news or entertainment.....


Your poems! That would be fine.
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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)

Postby Krisi » Mon Jan 28, 2008 2:18 am

What do you think?
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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)

Postby denvinbo » Mon Jan 28, 2008 10:53 am

Yeah! A good idea....I will try my best to do............
Hey! I'm stuck! Get me out!

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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)

Postby Krisi » Mon Jan 28, 2008 11:09 am

denvinbo wrote:Yeah! A good idea....I will try my best to do............


Good luck! :)
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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)

Postby denvinbo » Tue Jan 29, 2008 11:22 am

Clouds float gently
Many distressed
Still in the heart
To the cold rain pour
Every night
I feel unhappy
Do you know???
In the middle of rolling dark
Your love like a dream
Blue the hope
Lead my life steps
To pass the bitter
Take away the dark clouds
Funny sun's shine
Sparkling and warm.....
When the rain stop
Our love is out of difficulty
Roll all long night
For the sun shine
So I will happy
And there's no doubt
Love like a song
Hand in hand
To give the warmth
And those two
Happy when they see
Each other.....
In a new day
Sunlight grow up the trees
And spread to all the yard
Sunlight pass through
The leaf canopy....
Wind play with the butterfly
Funny steps...
Happy and sweetly
We go together
To the peaceful place.....

What do you think???? :D :D
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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)

Postby Krisi » Tue Jan 29, 2008 11:31 am

:lol: :lol: :lol: :P :P :P
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