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lovepoetry wrote:find poem in here http://www.learnenglishabc.org
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hmm are u talking about a person who was indifferent with u?
or is it about anyone who was deluded?
i think it's about indifference am i rigt?
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crocodile Tears ....written by me


I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train

* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be

* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win

as u said its about indifference ...u expressed it correctly
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http://www.learnenglishabc.org

i ddn;t see this site
dd anyone see this site
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shakespear wrote:crocodile Tears


I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train

* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be

* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win

i wrote it in the college....i show it to my teacher, he praised me for writing it
our life is like a night mare
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