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I'll write your name
To all the stars
And I know in you
That there're many aspiration
'Cause you can't see the sun
When you are standing on the ground

But the ray of hopes
Will never dissolve into nothingness
'Cause I'm near you
To bring your blue
Let's believe in miracle
'Cause tomorrow will never wilt
You and me in a dream
Only us.

Have you ever know that
The sky is full of stars
Have you ever sing loudly
many people 'round you
Do they see the love
That it makes you happy.

Do you know on this world
I'm the one still love you
Bring many hopes
With many things to say
But you'd never know me
If you saw the sun.

Want to be near when you smile
Want to see the wind
Glide past your hair
The singing I wrote for you
Hope you will sing it in future.

The sea of love
Still makes you faraway
Many night
Drizzling rain's sound was gently
Hope the sky help me once
Make you know 'bout my love.
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GOOD DAY FOR EVERY ONE
our life is like a night mare
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I hope so..............
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Hi all of you ,I`d like to thank you. Good luck .
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Hi everyone,nice to meet u again. Good luck
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Hi denvinbo. I think it`s fantastic .Go ahead and good luck.
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Hi
Where r u denvinbo
I want to hear about u and ur poems
Bye
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What do you think about this?

Clouds float gently
Many distressed
Still in the heart
To the cold rain pour
Every night
I feel unhappy
Do you know???
In the middle of rolling dark
Your love like a dream
Blue the hope
Lead my life steps
To pass the bitter
Take away the dark clouds
Funny sun's shine
Sparkling and warm.....
When the rain stop
Our love is out of difficulty
Roll all long night
For the sun shine
So I will happy
And there's no doubt
Love like a song
Hand in hand
To give the warmth
And those two
Happy when they see
Each other.....
In a new day
Sunlight grow up the trees
And spread to all the yard
Sunlight pass through
The leaf canopy....
Wind play with the butterfly
Funny steps...
Happy and sweetly
We go together
To the peaceful place.....


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shakespear wrote:THE SLAVE
Slip my collar, give me freedom
Don't yoke me more than this
Your eyes captured me, I lost wisdom
I beg you nothing, but a will to kiss
Loving you truly, I got nothing
My heart bleeds, as a killed bird
There was, in my ears, a bell ring
Repeating your speech, word by word

shakspear, you remind me with AUM Kulthom's song but i only remmber a line "give my freedom realse my hanns"اعطني حريتي اطلق يدي so here u make a simily between love and slave sometimes love is slave but we choose to be slaves

cheeeeeeeeeeeers
دخلت حياتي كنسمة وخرجت منها كإعصار
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Dear Sweets

See, .... that blacgurad(psycho) disappeard.

Other guyes are O.K.

you are creating everybody as they are like a poet.

One by one try to show their best. I welcome it.

But you are so far away from Tora, Hardi, Bang uncle..etc...

resently you did not touch with them like in the past.

Thouch with them soon

bye
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Hi murugan
I didn`t allege that I`m like the greatest poems but at least I`m trying and we all have to try.
Nevertheless I thank u for ur comment.
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I like all poems,goodluck in future ;-) .
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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hi
u seem sad.
do u read my last poem;" i describe barbara"?
i`m waiting 4 ur comment ,,,,
have happy times
c u soon
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hi everyone
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hi everyone and goodluck
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hi friend really ur poem is good and i think u have high spirit.u can write much poems .go ahead and go on writing .
gdluck for u and for all friends.
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hi
is the lover always a slave to whom he loves?
we have to live our life freely
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sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx
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farah wrote:hi
is the lover always a slave to whom he loves?

i don't think so
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hi
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Hi...Nice one :) Love is for enjoying it to the fullest, every second of ur life.
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thnx 4 this comment
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Really nice poem!!

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davidbendtner wrote:ABC Family channel
what does this mean?
thnx
have nice moments
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Lara wrote:Hi...Nice one :) Love is for enjoying it to the fullest, every second of ur life.
not just 4 this
we can't control wt we do
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shakespear wrote:THE SLAVE
Slip my collar, give me freedom
Don't yoke me more than this
Your eyes captured me, I lost wisdom
I beg you nothing, but a will to kiss
Loving you truly, I got nothing
My heart bleeds, as a killed bird
There was, in my ears, a bell ring
Repeating your speech, word by word
the slave
our life is like a night mare
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