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Re: poem

Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 10:59 am
by denvinbo
I'll write your name
To all the stars
And I know in you
That there're many aspiration
'Cause you can't see the sun
When you are standing on the ground

But the ray of hopes
Will never dissolve into nothingness
'Cause I'm near you
To bring your blue
Let's believe in miracle
'Cause tomorrow will never wilt
You and me in a dream
Only us.

Have you ever know that
The sky is full of stars
Have you ever sing loudly
many people 'round you
Do they see the love
That it makes you happy.

Do you know on this world
I'm the one still love you
Bring many hopes
With many things to say
But you'd never know me
If you saw the sun.

Want to be near when you smile
Want to see the wind
Glide past your hair
The singing I wrote for you
Hope you will sing it in future.

The sea of love
Still makes you faraway
Many night
Drizzling rain's sound was gently
Hope the sky help me once
Make you know 'bout my love.

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 7:23 am
by shakespear
GOOD DAY FOR EVERY ONE

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:11 am
by denvinbo
I hope so..............

Re: poem

Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:20 am
by shakespear
Hi all of you ,I`d like to thank you. Good luck .

Re: poem

Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:13 am
by shakespear
Hi everyone,nice to meet u again. Good luck

Re: poem

Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:34 am
by shakespear
Hi denvinbo. I think it`s fantastic .Go ahead and good luck.

Re: poem

Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:31 am
by shakespear
Hi
Where r u denvinbo
I want to hear about u and ur poems
Bye

Re: poem

Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 1:24 pm
by alkhader
What do you think about this?

Clouds float gently
Many distressed
Still in the heart
To the cold rain pour
Every night
I feel unhappy
Do you know???
In the middle of rolling dark
Your love like a dream
Blue the hope
Lead my life steps
To pass the bitter
Take away the dark clouds
Funny sun's shine
Sparkling and warm.....
When the rain stop
Our love is out of difficulty
Roll all long night
For the sun shine
So I will happy
And there's no doubt
Love like a song
Hand in hand
To give the warmth
And those two
Happy when they see
Each other.....
In a new day
Sunlight grow up the trees
And spread to all the yard
Sunlight pass through
The leaf canopy....
Wind play with the butterfly
Funny steps...
Happy and sweetly
We go together
To the peaceful place.....


The person who submit this peom I say to him Thank u 4 ever for it
if you can keep sending my throught my e-mail *******.com


Regards

Alkhader Ali

Re: poem

Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 1:47 pm
by sweets
shakespear wrote:THE SLAVE
Slip my collar, give me freedom
Don't yoke me more than this
Your eyes captured me, I lost wisdom
I beg you nothing, but a will to kiss
Loving you truly, I got nothing
My heart bleeds, as a killed bird
There was, in my ears, a bell ring
Repeating your speech, word by word

shakspear, you remind me with AUM Kulthom's song but i only remmber a line "give my freedom realse my hanns"اعطني حريتي اطلق يدي so here u make a simily between love and slave sometimes love is slave but we choose to be slaves

cheeeeeeeeeeeers

Re: poem

Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 7:04 pm
by murugan
Dear Sweets

See, .... that blacgurad(psycho) disappeard.

Other guyes are O.K.

you are creating everybody as they are like a poet.

One by one try to show their best. I welcome it.

But you are so far away from Tora, Hardi, Bang uncle..etc...

resently you did not touch with them like in the past.

Thouch with them soon

bye
murugan

Re: poem

Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 9:07 am
by shakespear
Hi murugan
I didn`t allege that I`m like the greatest poems but at least I`m trying and we all have to try.
Nevertheless I thank u for ur comment.

Re: poem

Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 9:34 am
by Annaa
I like all poems,goodluck in future ;-) .

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 5:38 am
by shakespear
hi
u seem sad.
do u read my last poem;" i describe barbara"?
i`m waiting 4 ur comment ,,,,
have happy times
c u soon

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 10:54 am
by shakespear
hi everyone

Re: poem

Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:22 am
by shakespear
hi everyone and goodluck

Re: poem

Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 11:04 am
by shakespear
hi friend really ur poem is good and i think u have high spirit.u can write much poems .go ahead and go on writing .
gdluck for u and for all friends.

Re: poem

Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:45 am
by farah
hi
is the lover always a slave to whom he loves?

Re: poem

Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:34 pm
by shakespear
sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx

Re: poem

Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 6:35 pm
by shakespear
farah wrote:hi
is the lover always a slave to whom he loves?

i don't think so

Re: poem

Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:18 am
by shakespear
hi

Re: poem

Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 5:30 am
by Lara
Hi...Nice one :) Love is for enjoying it to the fullest, every second of ur life.

Re: poem

Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:31 pm
by shakespear
thnx 4 this comment

Re: poem

Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2011 8:04 am
by davidbendtner
Really nice poem!!

ABC Family channel

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2011 11:42 am
by shakespear
davidbendtner wrote:ABC Family channel
what does this mean?
thnx
have nice moments

Re: poem

Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:53 am
by shakespear
Lara wrote:Hi...Nice one :) Love is for enjoying it to the fullest, every second of ur life.
not just 4 this
we can't control wt we do

Re: poem

Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 9:52 am
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:THE SLAVE
Slip my collar, give me freedom
Don't yoke me more than this
Your eyes captured me, I lost wisdom
I beg you nothing, but a will to kiss
Loving you truly, I got nothing
My heart bleeds, as a killed bird
There was, in my ears, a bell ring
Repeating your speech, word by word
the slave