poem

[Vega]

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[mybikiny]

Fantastic poem, it made me cry

[shakespear]

fantastic poem,words and idea .Good luck and god bless you .

[Krisi]

Why? Xkalibur, what motivated you to make this sad poem? (I thought our brother won't fall in love)
How sure are you that the woman broke your heart? it could be vice versa...or probably both of you could be hurting each other...

[Vega]

Thanks everybody for your comments!

Why? Xkalibur, what motivated you to make this sad poem? (I thought our brother won't fall in love)
How sure are you that the woman broke your heart? it could be vice versa...or probably both of you could be hurting each other...

How sure you are that things weren't as I write, but true as you say? :P To you, I presume, poems should be objective, correct from the point of circumstances. Where the creativity then? :?

[shakespear]

we are who must thank you .

[Snowy*]

It's really beautiful poem
It's full of Emotions

[Sunnypk]

woww it's written really marvelour Xkalibur brother as usual I call you . :)

keep it up