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Re: to woman that broke my heart
Fantastic poem, it made me cry
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Re: to woman that broke my heart
fantastic poem,words and idea .Good luck and god bless you .
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Re: to woman that broke my heart
Why? Xkalibur, what motivated you to make this sad poem? (I thought our brother won't fall in love)
How sure are you that the woman broke your heart? it could be vice versa...or probably both of you could be hurting each other...
How sure are you that the woman broke your heart? it could be vice versa...or probably both of you could be hurting each other...
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Re: to woman that broke my heart
Thanks everybody for your comments!
How sure you are that things weren't as I write, but true as you say? :P To you, I presume, poems should be objective, correct from the point of circumstances. Where the creativity then? :?krisi wrote:Why? Xkalibur, what motivated you to make this sad poem? (I thought our brother won't fall in love)
How sure are you that the woman broke your heart? it could be vice versa...or probably both of you could be hurting each other...
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Re: to woman that broke my heart
It's really beautiful poem
It's full of Emotions
It's full of Emotions
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Re: to woman that broke my heart
woww it's written really marvelour Xkalibur brother as usual I call you . :)
keep it up
keep it up
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