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SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

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SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Postby shakespear » Mon Feb 18, 2008 10:01 am

SOUL & NIGHT
World was sinking in dark
Calmness was spread in everywhere
Everything was quite quiet
Even stars sank in deep sleep
Winds were motionless
Trees were like statues
As they, too, were quiet
Suddenly I felt her, coming towards me
Hard, I could touch her
So I traveled so far
To the far place where the ease was
I settled there for ever more
And forgot, but her, the whole
My soul swam in heights
Flew, like birds, in the sky
And hold her tightly
Without any feelings .


THANKS ALOT
our life is like a night mare
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Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Postby denvinbo » Mon Feb 18, 2008 11:07 am

Good..... :)
Hey! I'm stuck! Get me out!

PIETY-The stories of parents and children
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Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Postby Sunnypk » Mon Feb 18, 2008 12:15 pm

it's nice
you are written very effective poem I like it
As you so, so shall you reap
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Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Postby shakespear » Tue Feb 19, 2008 6:40 am

thanks a lot all of you . :)
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Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:22 am

Thanks a lot to everyone who encourages me and good luck ,
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Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Postby shakespear » Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:16 am

Hi . Our life is short,so why we don`t enjoy our selves.
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Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Postby EliasJ » Fri Apr 11, 2008 8:36 am

hi you are a good writer and i encourage you to continue writing and i am waiting for you next poem
good luck :P
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Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Postby shakespear » Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:12 am

thank u
EliasJ
u really engourage me
good luck
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Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Postby shakespear » Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:30 am

hi everone
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
c u soon
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Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:21 pm

hi
every one always needs to be encouraged, don`t u think?
c u soon good luck
bye
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