Can someone help me?

[Vega]

You have a strong command of English. You can post your writings here, members usually read them and post comments..

[sweets]

show us ur writings

iam waiting

see u

[shakespear]

'I have written many stories on different subjects and I would like to share these with other people so that I can expand and develop my skills on writing. I don’t have much experience in this but its my passion, because for me writing is a dream which elevates me to the peak of the mountain and then brings me down to the deep depths of the valley, it’s like a adventure where I have just started to explore and I know someday I will reach there. Can someone help me? Thanks!'
I think these lines are excellent.
u can send us your writing and we`ll share with you opinions. Good luck.