LOVELY FACE

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If really so than thanks to understand me
As you sew, so shall you reap
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Hi sunnypk. My friend I`d like to thank u cuz u advise me.
We must all learn from others.thanks again.
our life is like a night mare
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it a wonderful describeof the face dont give up and keep up writing
good job :wink:
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thank u
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good luck
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hi everone
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
c u soon
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hi
from time to time i read my poems and try 2 collect them,
try 2 remember them ,
2 remember the events related 2 them
that is ok
now i feel cool now
good luck
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hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare
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i think its great sth new
we have to live our life freely
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sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx
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hi farah
wr r u?
plz keep contact
gd lk
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shakespear wrote:Your eyes`re like stars
Lit the sky in the dark
Hi! i hadnt read this poem and i think it will take much time to read all of them :D.
well this poem is full brightness u used sweet words, it's so nice.
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thnx friend and i hope to read ur last poem....
best wishes
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shakespear wrote:LOVELY FACE
Your eyes`re like stars
Lit the sky in the dark
Your cheeks `re like apples
Sweet taste in the mouth
Your lips are like fig
I always wish to taste them
Hastely..Hastely come to me
I'm sick in the bed
All the beauty in your face
Your face is a great world

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