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PIETY

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Re: PIETY

Postby Krisi » Thu Apr 03, 2008 12:32 pm

Your story is funny now... no direction. :)
click --> Happy Valentine!
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Re: PIETY

Postby denvinbo » Mon Apr 07, 2008 10:21 am

The continuation is ready to post..... :wink:
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PIETY-The stories of parents and children
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Re: PIETY

Postby Krisi » Tue Apr 08, 2008 1:13 am

denvinbo wrote:The continuation is ready to post..... :wink:


Where is it my friend?

(How did you celebrate your 14th B-day last Saturday Denvinbo?)
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Re: PIETY

Postby denvinbo » Tue Apr 08, 2008 3:04 am

Krisi wrote:
denvinbo wrote:The continuation is ready to post..... :wink:


Where is it my friend?

(How did you celebrate your 14th B-day last Saturday Denvinbo?)


A big cake with strawberry cream and vanilla...... :wink:
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Re: PIETY

Postby Krisi » Tue Apr 08, 2008 3:09 am

denvinbo wrote:
Krisi wrote:
denvinbo wrote:The continuation is ready to post..... :wink:


Where is it my friend?

(How did you celebrate your 14th B-day last Saturday Denvinbo?)


A big cake with strawberry cream and vanilla...... :wink:


Nice! Here's a kiss from me... :arrow: :P wipe the lipstick... :lol:
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Re: PIETY

Postby denvinbo » Tue Apr 08, 2008 11:28 am

_The boy said like as arguing with me:
- He didn't remember about those angels who took care of him and protected him, did he?
- I don't think so... When the weather became windy and rainy, sure that he would remember the wings had protected him. He could cry for a long time, to forget...
- You said... That person only remembered those wing's uses, he was not actually felt sorry for those 2 angels?
_The neighbor boy's question made me stopped for a whole. I held the "false" angels tightly in my hands, directed my eyes to the far horizon in sunset and couldn't said anything...
_Until a wind flew, I continued to said:
- He also thought about that then...
- When?
- When he understood that... He couldn't come back to the past forever. And he remembered...
- Why didn't he return?
- Because... That boy, one morning, he suddenly got up and found that on his back grown 2 wings. It's mean he was an angel, too...
- Wow, is that wonderful? He could fly with those wings, couldn't he?
- Because you don't know, those wings couldn't fly, it was used for protecting...
- Strange? What did those wings protect for? Was the new angel's job different from the former?

To be continued..... :wink:
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Postby denvinbo » Sat Apr 12, 2008 2:52 am

- No different. At that time, there was a small house under the wings. A family. Babies God had just given. There's love and tears.
_The neighbor boy heard it, inferred:
- So that being an angel is hard and no confident!
- Yes, very hard. But they changed that hard into happiness.
_Listened to me, the boy looked at me a whole and asked:
- You said... there's really have those 2 angels.
_I shook down my head:
- Yes!
- So... why don't you return?
- I have said to you. I can't go back. When we recognized, everything was late.
_The boy shook his head:
- I don't understand...
- When you grow up, you will understand. Now, you don't know, until your father, mother...

To be continued.... :wink:
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Re: PIETY

Postby denvinbo » Tue Apr 15, 2008 9:14 am

The end of the story is ready......... :lol:
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Re: PIETY

Postby Krisi » Tue Apr 15, 2008 10:37 am

denvinbo wrote:The end of the story is ready......... :lol:


Can't understand, you have just started and now you're near the end of the story... :roll: I can't see the point!!! hahahahaha :lol:
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Re: PIETY

Postby denvinbo » Tue Apr 15, 2008 1:12 pm

The Volunteered Angels still continue.........I just have the end for this story.... :wink: :lol:
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