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once upon time

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once upon time

Postby sweets » Sat Apr 26, 2008 12:19 pm

once upon time we were two
we shared everything
dreams ...hopes... sadness ...ups and downs

once upon time
you promise me that you will stay forever ...for me..
you say that my love is big as sea ..as sky ..as earth

now iam standing in front of you'r grave put the roses you like
now iam here alone without you're kindness you're smile

once upon time we were two
now iam a lone

cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers
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Re: once upon time

Postby AlexVlasoff » Sat Apr 26, 2008 2:12 pm

It's funny! :D
I am not in my way, it's only reflection.
My innocent soul has not ressurection.
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Re: once upon time

Postby sweets » Sun Apr 27, 2008 1:46 pm

thank u AlexVlasoff
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Re: once upon time

Postby shakespear » Wed Apr 30, 2008 8:18 am

Hi sweet
ur poem is really excellent and i think u r on the right street to be good poet
GOOD LUCK
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Re: once upon time

Postby sweets » Wed Apr 30, 2008 8:31 am

shakespear said, "ur poem is really excellent and i think u r on the right street to be good poet"

shall i be good poet one day??????????????????
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Postby shakespear » Wed Apr 30, 2008 8:42 am

why not
don`t reduce ur activeness, u r really good
no kidding
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Re: once upon time

Postby sweets » Wed Apr 30, 2008 8:52 am

i'll take ur advice in consideration
thanx
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Re: once upon time

Postby shakespear » Wed Apr 30, 2008 8:55 am

notatall
u r welcome
i want to advise to read more english poet
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Re: once upon time

Postby sweets » Wed Apr 30, 2008 9:11 am

well
u know that iam studing english lit. so i am studying poems and novels and so on but i do not like poems we took almost of stusy about romantisim
in fact i like realistic more
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Re: once upon time

Postby shakespear » Thu May 01, 2008 7:35 am

hello
sweet read anything .it`s up to u & u r free to what u wish,we must read to progress in writing.
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