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Re: once upon time

Postby sweets » Mon Jun 23, 2008 1:44 pm

what i can only tell you that it was a lovely strange experince and iam sorry that it ended like this

cheeeeeeeeeeeers
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Re: once upon time

Postby Annaa » Tue Jun 24, 2008 7:49 am

sweets wrote:what i can only tell you that it was a lovely strange experince and iam sorry that it ended like this

cheeeeeeeeeeeers




I`m sorry for you .Is he alive ?
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Re: once upon time

Postby sweets » Tue Jun 24, 2008 9:56 am

no he dead last year
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Re: once upon time

Postby Annaa » Wed Jun 25, 2008 8:20 am

Aha,I`m very very sorry for you :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: ,but life goes on ;-) .
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Re: once upon time

Postby allison » Thu Jun 26, 2008 4:05 am

sweets wrote:once upon time we were two
we shared everything
dreams ...hopes... sadness ...ups and downs

once upon time
you promise me that you will stay forever ...for me..
you say that my love is big as sea ..as sky ..as earth

now iam standing in front of you'r grave put the roses you like
now iam here alone without you're kindness you're smile

once upon time we were two
now iam a lone

cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers


Sweets this is really very sad... :-( I'm really very sorry for what happened to you... I'm sorry, when did he die?
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