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LUST & SPIRIT
Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 12:01 pm
by shakespear
LUST & SPIRIT
Long time ago, I climbed the leafy tree
Which was wide-limbed
Reposing up there, I could feel two apples
They were hidden under leaves
At once I cried, how marvelous tree you're
How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone
Even me
Forbidden to reap
Forbidden to touch
Forbidden even to be seen
Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 1:42 pm
by sweets
shakespear wrote:LUST & SPIRIT
Long time ago, I climbed the leafy tree
Which was wide-limbed
Reposing up there, I could feel two apples
They were hidden under leaves
At once I cried, how marvelous tree you're
How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone
Even me
Forbidden to reap
Forbidden to touch
Forbidden even to be seen
the last four lines were powerful forbiden form every thing woooooooow
Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 10:33 am
by shakespear
Hi
I didn`t understand ur comment
Could u explain it for me
Thanks
Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 1:36 pm
by sweets
i mean that the four lines are about forbidens in life in genral "do touch ,do not this or that "and so on so when you combain these orders in simle lines i like them
cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers
Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:46 am
by shakespear
Hi sweet
Ur comment seems better than my poem.
I like it.
Much things r forbidden to us.
Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 1:04 pm
by loola
I like ur pen when you'r writing .
very strong word and too nice .. I feel it
thank u my friend I want to read more
Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 7:24 am
by shakespear
Hi loola
I who must thank u cuz u encourage me
Always I want to hear about u so be on contact and don`t be late
thanks again and good bye.
Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:26 pm
by shakespear
hi
r u with me?
r u waiting 4 me?
i love u but ............. u r not
good uck
bye
Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:15 am
by shakespear
hi everyone and goodluck
Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 8:47 am
by farah
i think there is a connection between this poem and another poem u had written. right?
that poem about our parents and the paradise
Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:07 pm
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:LUST & SPIRIT
Long time ago, I climbed the leafy tree
Which was wide-limbed
Reposing up there, I could feel two apples
They were hidden under leaves
At once I cried, how marvelous tree you're
How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone
Even me
Forbidden to reap
Forbidden to touch
Forbidden even to be seen
what is the meaning?
Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 4:09 pm
by Lara
shakespear wrote:
How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone
Shakespear, this poem caught my attention, When you think everything is too good, there is always something that keeps these good things are for us.
Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:35 am
by shakespear
yeah r8....good thing won't be full...i think so...
Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:28 am
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:LUST & SPIRIT
Long time ago, I climbed the leafy tree
Which was wide-limbed
Reposing up there, I could feel two apples
They were hidden under leaves
At once I cried, how marvelous tree you're
How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone
Even me
Forbidden to reap
Forbidden to touch
Forbidden even to be seen
short poem