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Ghost Stories............

Postby denvinbo » Thu Jun 05, 2008 10:08 am

Corvus's sound call souls........

- Ahhhhhh.........(shouted)
- What's up?
- Husband, I dreamed about our Huong (younger daughter). I saw she was in dangerous. Her face was white with green nerves. Her eyes was red and blood. (She cried)
- Woo...(feeling sad)... Don't worry....I think she OK!
- (cried).... why I can not worry!....
- OK! Tomorrow I will go to the post office and send some faxes to her..... Don't worry!...she'll be OK!
- (cried).... Are you sure?
- Yes....
- (stopped crying)....OK!

On the next day, the husband(Mr. Toan) went to the post office. When he was starting the motorcycle engine, the wife said:
- Careful!
- OK! I'll send her some faxes, if she replied, she would be OK! But if there was no reply, we would have to do anything....

The wife(Mrs. Phung) stayed at home in worry. She decided to go to Phuong's house (her elder daughter). When she arrived in front of the house, she wanted to knock the door, but she didn't. Vu (her son-in-law) on the upstairs window saw her and called:
- Mom....
He hurried to go downstairs and open the door:
- Hi, mom... What do you want?
- Hi, buddy... Is Phuong at home?
- Ah....Phuong..... mom comes......
Phuong waked up and hurried to go out and take her mom into the bedroom. Mrs. Phung told her what she had dreamed last night. After listening, Phuong said:
- I think nothing happened to Huong. Don't worry mom. If you don't believe in Huong, I will tell Vu take a bus for you to go to visit Huong.
- No need, Phuong. May be I will go home to wait for your father....
- Do you want to have lunch with me mom?
- Oh.... No thanks....Good bye, I will come over tomorrow.....
- Yes, mom.... Take care of the street.....

The next day, there's still nothing from Huong. Mrs. Phung came to Phuong's house again. Phuong said:
OK! I'll bring you to there!

To be continued..... ;-)
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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby Krisi » Fri Jun 06, 2008 12:45 am

hahahahaha... you're funny!

:-P Then what's next Denvinbo?
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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby sweets » Fri Jun 06, 2008 12:14 pm

iam waiting denvinbo do not be late

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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby denvinbo » Fri Jun 06, 2008 1:40 pm

They was on the road and they arrived in an hours.....When they stopped at Huong's house. They saw the door was locked, but the gate was still opened:
- Mom, I think they have no problems.... You wait here until anyone go home. I will ride around the town. :roll:
Phuong took her motorcycle, turned on the engine and went. Mrs. Phung wait at Huong's house. She saw a black corvus with red eyes. She began feeling scary. She was lying on the hammock hanged with 2 birches. The corvus shouted and make her jumped. She rushed to the gate and look the corvus. It stared at her. :!!:
Mrs.Phung decided to ask the next door what happened to Huong's family. She got into the house and see a woman doing the laundry. Mrs.Phung asked:
- May I asked you something?
- Sure...(surprised)
- Do you know what happened to the next door?
- Umm.... Nothing.....
- So when was the last time you she the girl?
- Umm...two or three days!
- Exactly!
- Umm... three....
Yes! 2 days ago Mrs.Phung had dreamed about Huong. May be something happened to her three days ago. Mrs.Phung felt worrying:
- Did they have any argument?
- No....
- How about the boy?
- Ah... He just went out this morning.... He wears a red cap.....
-.....(thinking).....Thank you.....
- Oh, hey......Who are you?
- I'm they mother.....
- Ah....
Going back to Huong's house. She looked into the yard and suddenly saw Huong's sight.....

:arrow: Does Huong still alive or she died?

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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby Krisi » Fri Jun 06, 2008 2:13 pm

What 's next? :-)
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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby denvinbo » Sat Jun 07, 2008 12:43 pm

Mrs.Phung rushed into the yard, suddenly, the sight disappeared. On the birch, the corvus still looked at Mrs.Phung. She felt dizzy and walked fast to the gate. It started raining, then it became heavier. Phuong returned, but her clothes was ragged, wet and her arms had some wounds. Phuong told to her mother what happened to her when she was on the road:
- Mom, I saw a very terrible thing. When I was riding, it rained. I was finding a place to hide, suddenly I saw a girl but I couldn't dodge. I hit her so strong that she casted to the mountain wall. I slipped down the slope and had a wound on my arm. I stood up and going to help the girl. But I saw that girl stood up before me. I'm very surprised. When I saw carefully, I recognized she was Huong. Her face and body were white. She said: "- Sister, I died...............". I revived and turned back to tell you. Mom, I felt there's something out of sight.....
Mrs.Phung kept silent. But Phuong know she was thinking about what happened to Huong. A half hours later, Bang (Huong's husband) came home, he was vary surprised of Mrs.Phung and Phuong appearance. After he loaded the cement bag from his motorcycle, he said:
- Mom, Sister, When did you come here?
- In the morning - said Phuong.
- Where's Huong? - asked Mrs.Phung.
- Oh.... She didn't come over you, did she? - said Bang.
- No.... When did she go? - asked Mrs.Phung.
- That's strange.... She went yesterday.... She should visit you.... - said Bang.
- I haven't saw her 2 days....May be she get lost. - said Phuong.
- Yeah! I think she at your home, now. You'd better go home and check.....- said Bang
- Uhm..........
Mrs.Phung dreamed about Huong 2 days ago, but Bang said she just left yesterday. Anyway, let's go home and check out. When Phuong started the engine, It didn't work. She tried many times, but It still can't. She said:
- Too late. It's 5 pm and if we returned at this time, it would be too dangerous. Hey, Bang, Do you know the nearest motorcycle fixed station.
- Uh....It takes 2 hours to go there.....
- Wew....May be we have to go there....- said Mrs.Phung.
- I'll go with you - said Bang.
- In a minute, I want to go WC......- said Mrs.Phung
When she ran into the yard, Bang suddenly felt nervous and ran after her to pull her back. But too late:
- AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH..............
Mrs.Phung shouted and unconscious, she fell down on the ground. Phuong hurried to go to there. When she saw the toilet, she spitted. There was an arm raised up from the hold, white and bloated. Bang had an argument with Huong three days ago, he kill her but he don't know how to destroy the evidence, he putted Huong's body to the hold of the toilet and bought some cement to fill up. But the hold was too small to put the other arm....Now, Bang couldn't explain the crime he had done. At that time, the black corvus flied away, may be it had done its responsibility........

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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby denvinbo » Tue Jun 10, 2008 6:14 am

The next story....

Night No Moon..........

Character:
Phan
Nga
My (Nga's sister)
Mrs.Ha and Mr.Tung (Phan's parents)
Mr.Tan (Nga's father)
Thuan
Ms.Kim

The story happened at a farm. That night, at Mr.Tung house, there was a funeral, Mrs.Ha was crying before the casket, in the casket, it was Phan body. He died... A woman said:
- Phew... Don't cry, Ha. Phan died, even you cry to river, Phan never return.
Mrs.Ha continued crying, although the woman said anything. But suddenly, a black cat appeared at the window behind Phan's casket with red eyes, it sounded:
- MEOW........................
The sound made everybody in the room feel frightened. They all stepped backwards, the black cat disappeared, left the black night behind. Mrs.ha was very scary, but she was still crying. Time to close the casket, 2 boys helped Mr.Tung carry the lid, but Mrs.Ha didn't accept, she said:
- Phan haven't died, he hasn't died.... You can't close the casket....He will return....return.....
But anyway, the casket was closed, although Mrs.Ha shouted very loud. Right after the casket closed, the black cat appeared again and sounded:
- MEOW....................
Then, it disappeared, but another sight appeared.....How surprising, that was Phan....But... His body was full of murderous air, the blood on his face covered his eyes and mouth....Suddenly, he stared....and touched the window.....

:arrow: Is Phan still alive?

To be continued..... ;-)
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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby Annaa » Sat Jun 14, 2008 9:28 am

Did u write those stories by urself ? :-D
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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby denvinbo » Sun Jun 15, 2008 3:17 am

Annaa wrote:Did u write those stories by urself ? :-D


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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby Annaa » Mon Jun 16, 2008 9:06 am

denvinbo wrote:
Annaa wrote:Did u write those stories by urself ? :-D


:oops: :oops:



I didn`t know that u r a writer :lol: :lol: :lol:
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