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I describe Barbara

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I describe Barbara

Postby shakespear » Wed Jun 25, 2008 7:13 am

I describe Barbara
Your hair`s like dark night
Of anything I can`t catch sight
Your face`s very bright
Lights the dark from its height

* * *
The apples borrowed your check`s colour
The hind wished your diamond eyes
And looking into them, I`m in failure
Sailing in them, I`ll be the sailor

* * *
Your lips are like ripe fig
Delicious taste in my mouth
Your speech`s voice`s like gig
Soft music takes me to the south

* * *
Your neck is a beautiful figure
Its taste is like sugar
Closely coming, I stepped to nip
from life-spring I `v to sip

* * *
Your breasts are like mushroom
Dear me! I must face my doom
I must suck and taste wine
Then the rosy nipples will shine

* * *
Your belly is very flat
Not skinny, not ugly, never fat
Your buttocks are supple in hand
I`ve never seen white sand

* * *
Your crotch is holy temple
An adorer knees before this sample
I shot a luxurious sigh
When I saw marvelous thigh

* * *
our life is like a night mare
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Re: I describe Barbara

Postby Annaa » Wed Jun 25, 2008 8:19 am

I like a lot this poem,who is Barbara ? :shock: :lol: :lol:
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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Re: I describe Barbara

Postby shakespear » Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:20 am

hi annaa
thnx 4 this comment.
barbara represents the holy love not real woman.this poem represents our real emotions
and if she was real, i can`t disclose her name until she accept.
thnx again
c u soon
our life is like a night mare
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Re: I describe Barbara

Postby Annaa » Thu Jun 26, 2008 8:26 am

shakespear wrote:hi annaa
thnx 4 this comment.
barbara represents the holy love not real woman.this poem represents our real emotions
and if she was real, i can`t disclose her name until she accept.
thnx again
c u soon



Aha,oke :oops: :-D
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Re: I describe Barbara

Postby shakespear » Thu Jun 26, 2008 1:46 pm

I describe Barbara
Your hair`s like dark night
Of anything I can`t catch sight
Your face`s very bright
Lights the dark from its height
* * *
The apples borrowed your check`s colour
The hind wished your diamond eyes
And looking into them, I`m in failure
Sailing in them, I`ll be the sailor
* * *
Your lips are like ripe fig
Delicious taste in my mouth
Your speech`s voice`s like gig
Soft music takes me to the south
* * *
Your neck is a beautiful figure
Its taste is like sugar
Closely coming, I stepped to nip
from life-spring I `v to sip
* * *
Your breasts are like mushroom
Dear me! I must face my doom
I must suck and taste wine
Then the rosy nipples will shine
* * *
Your belly is very flat
Not skinny, not ugly, never fat
Your buttocks are supple in hand
I`ve never seen white sand
* * *
Your crotch is holy temple
An adorer knees before this sample
I shot a luxurious sigh
When I saw marvelous thigh
* * *

i want to issu it agin koz it`s not clear there
thnx
our life is like a night mare
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Re: I describe Barbara

Postby sweets » Thu Jun 26, 2008 5:16 pm

hi
well i read not only once but twice i see that ur as plato plato was looking for the city of virtue and ur looking for the impossible woman but did u think that this beauty might kill?


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Re: I describe Barbara

Postby shakespear » Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:32 am

hi sweet
i`d like to thank you on this comment, and although it is short but it carries much meanings & emotions.
you said months ago a proverb " some of love may kill" ومن الحب ما قتل -.
I`m not as Plato who looked for his city, and there is a great difference between him & me, koz i`m real and expressing real things in our daily life.So I think we can find real love decribed in my poem.
thnx again, and be always in touch with me.
c u soon
our life is like a night mare
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Re: I describe Barbara

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:10 pm

hi
we always turn our head towards the past but it doesn`t come back to us .it runs as fast as a train.
let`s live our happy days
good luck
our life is like a night mare
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Re: I describe Barbara

Postby shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:19 am

hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare
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Re: I describe Barbara

Postby farah » Sat Feb 28, 2009 2:02 pm

hi
terrible
we have to live our life freely
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