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TO ELENA

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TO ELENA

Postby shakespear » Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:37 am

TO ELENALong golden tresses of Venus the blonde
Scattered in the fair breeze of the night
Be merciful towards me, of you I’m very fond
Don`t cover your hair, let me catch sight
* * *
I love you as much as a sea
You are as beautiful as a hind
Although you are distant from me
But you`re still in my heart and mind
* * *
You have lovely stature, you are tidy /taidi/
You walk with grace and move with grace
Oh darling! let us meet on Friday /fraidi/
I spent my age tracing your trace
* * *
Looking at you eyes, I feel well
All the world in your sexy eyes
I follow you even to the hell
I was sane but I`m no longer wise
* * *
our life is like a night mare
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Re: TO ELENA

Postby Annaa » Mon Jun 30, 2008 11:40 am

I love you as much as a sea
You are as beautiful as a hind
Although you are distant from me
But you`re still in my heart and mind




I love this :-D .Is Elena a imaginary person ?
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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Re: TO ELENA

Postby shakespear » Wed Jul 02, 2008 6:20 am

hi anna
thnx for this question but elena a true charater but she represents impossible love or relationship and none can help these 2 lovers to be slose one 2 another.it`s impossible love.
thanx
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Re: TO ELENA

Postby Annaa » Wed Jul 02, 2008 8:41 pm

shakespear wrote:hi anna
thnx for this question but elena a true charater but she represents impossible love or relationship and none can help these 2 lovers to be slose one 2 another.it`s impossible love.
thanx





Can you tell me why it`s impossible,please ?
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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Re: TO ELENA

Postby shakespear » Fri Jul 04, 2008 1:41 pm

hi anna
i met with elena online and i asked her to be my love and wife but she refused that koz sh is in romania and i in iraq.
don`t u think it`s impossible
thanks
plz send me ur email i`d like to chat with u
c u soon
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Re: TO ELENA

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:36 pm

TO ELENA
Long golden tresses of Venus the blonde
Scattered in the fair breeze of the night
Be merciful towards me, of you I’m very fond
Don`t cover your hair, let me catch sight
* * *
I love you as much as a sea
You are as beautiful as a hind
Although you are distant from me
But you`re still in my heart and mind
* * *
You have lovely stature, you are tidy /taidi/
You walk with grace and move with grace
Oh darling! let us meet on Friday /fraidi/
I spent my age tracing your trace
* * *
Looking at you eyes, I feel well
All the world in your sexy eyes
I follow you even to the hell
I was sane but I`m no longer wise

really i loved her but now i can`t contact her so what to do?
advise me
i`m waiting
cu soon
bye
our life is like a night mare
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Re: TO ELENA

Postby shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:11 am

hi everyone and goodluck
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Re: TO ELENA

Postby farah » Sun Mar 01, 2009 10:15 am

just imagination
u live in adream
we have to live our life freely
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Re: TO ELENA

Postby (((Edu))) » Tue Mar 10, 2009 7:36 pm

Did Elena read this issue?
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Re: TO ELENA

Postby shakespear » Wed Mar 25, 2009 1:37 pm

hi edu
i sent this poem to elena and she was very happy
but she is no longer in love withme
and she left me................its sad story and i don`t want to sadden you.
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