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TO ELENA/2

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TO ELENA/2

Postby shakespear » Sun Jun 29, 2008 6:20 am

TO ELENA/2
I loved whom I`ve never seen
But I talk with her everyday
Through the net I touch Elen
By my heart, in holy way
* * *
Every night I lie in dark
Trying to imagine her lovely face
Darling Elena, give me a mark
I became in so bad case
* * *
My torture has been increasing
Nothing can dispel my pain
Oh Elena! you are pleasing...
Your lover, you`re sane
* * *
From me, she is vey distant
How can I hug her or kiss?
My life becomes on the slant
I really miss her kindness
* * *
Once, I dreamt we`re together
At the seaside, we were very glad
Suddenly, I woke up to the suffer
And found my spirit was sad
* * *
THE END
our life is like a night mare
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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby JasmineQ » Sun Jun 29, 2008 9:24 am

sooo nice Shakspeare
if that was true,she would be so lucky {-;
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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby sweets » Sun Jun 29, 2008 9:59 am

oh Elena
i only wish that ur not a dream cuz. dreams like u are so danger sometimes mixs with reality

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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby Annaa » Mon Jun 30, 2008 11:42 am

Shakespear do u have any book ?
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby shakespear » Wed Jul 02, 2008 6:08 am

hi everyone
i`d like 2 thank u 4 these lovely comments.this poem is the 2nd part of "to elena" and u must read the 1st part.
sweet sometimes we must our lovely dreams to escape from our hard & life. once u said that we sometimes tell lies 4 many reasons.
dear anna, i don`t understand what book u mean maybe u mean my volume or a book else
have nice time & thnx
bye.
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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby sweets » Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:50 am

so shakespear you use my ideas that's good
u can dream but be sure to wake up at right moment

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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby Annaa » Wed Jul 02, 2008 8:40 pm

shakespear wrote:hi everyone
i`d like 2 thank u 4 these lovely comments.this poem is the 2nd part of "to elena" and u must read the 1st part.
sweet sometimes we must our lovely dreams to escape from our hard & life. once u said that we sometimes tell lies 4 many reasons.
dear anna, i don`t understand what book u mean maybe u mean my volume or a book else
have nice time & thnx
bye.
.





I thought do u have ur own book ??,do u understand now me,a book that u wrote.
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby shakespear » Fri Jul 04, 2008 1:46 pm

hi annaa
plz contact with me on this email:darkstarthe1st@yahoo.com
i`m waiting
thnx
c u soon
bye
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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby Annaa » Sat Jul 05, 2008 6:00 pm

shakespear wrote:hi annaa
plz contact with me on this email:darkstarthe1st@yahoo.com
i`m waiting
thnx
c u soon
bye




C u
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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby shakespear » Tue Jul 08, 2008 6:01 am

hi
where r u annaa?
i`m waiting 4 u.
contact me plz
c u
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