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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby Annaa » Sun Jul 13, 2008 3:13 pm

shakespear wrote:hi
where r u annaa?
i`m waiting 4 u.
contact me plz
c u
bye


I`m sorry but nowdays my msn isn`t working :-? :-? .
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby shakespear » Sun Aug 03, 2008 11:24 am

hi anna
feel free and have nice days
i wanna contact u but u said that ur sms isnot well nowadays
ok c u later
bye
our life is like a night mare
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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:40 pm

hi
really i loved elena but now i can`t contact her so what to do?
advise me
i`m waiting
cu soon
bye
our life is like a night mare
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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:09 am

hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare
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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby farah » Sun Mar 01, 2009 11:40 am

i`m eager to read the 1st part
we have to live our life freely
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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby farah » Sun Mar 01, 2009 11:47 am

i`m eager to read the 1st part
we have to live our life freely
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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:14 pm

shakespear wrote:TO ELENA/2
I loved whom I`ve never seen
But I talk with her everyday
Through the net I touch Elen
By my heart, in holy way
* * *
Every night I lie in dark
Trying to imagine her lovely face
Darling Elena, give me a mark
I became in so bad case
* * *
My torture has been increasing
Nothing can dispel my pain
Oh Elena! you are pleasing...
Your lover, you`re sane
* * *
From me, she is vey distant
How can I hug her or kiss?
My life becomes on the slant
I really miss her kindness
* * *
Once, I dreamt we`re together
At the seaside, we were very glad
Suddenly, I woke up to the suffer
And found my spirit was sad
* * *
THE END


sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx
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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby shakespear » Fri Feb 04, 2011 7:36 pm

hello my friend anna
where r u nowadays
i hope u r ok
have lovely times
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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby Lara » Wed Sep 28, 2011 5:17 am

shakespear wrote:
shakespear wrote:TO ELENA/2
I loved whom I`ve never seen
But I talk with her everyday
Through the net I touch Elen
By my heart, in holy way
* * *
Once, I dreamt we`re together
At the seaside, we were very glad
Suddenly, I woke up to the suffer
And found my spirit was sad


Good Poem!, it expresses sadness because of a love who was there and then went...As u said in the poem; having a love through distance, is like having a dream during a whole night and u dont wanna wake up, but unfortunaly although we refuse to do it, it will happen.
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Re: TO ELENA/2

Postby shakespear » Thu Sep 29, 2011 10:56 am

Lara wrote:having a love through distance, is like having a dream during a whole night and u dont wanna wake up, but unfortunaly although we refuse to do it, it will happen.


what on earth a lovely comments is this?!!!
really u always choose expressing words by which u make lovely comments... thnx 4 this comment and have nice moments
c u
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