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Broken

Postby imad » Sun Jun 29, 2008 6:42 pm

Broken life, empty soul
Can't see behind the sky
Can't go through this nightmare
Cause I've lost everything

To fight this madness, I must reborn
I'll fight this monster living inside of me
This broken life must be broken

I'm waiting for you
All the time I have
All the time you ned
You have to feel the hell I live in

You will see after that I'm just a pawn
Nothing more


I'll follow the train of life, and make a new one
Cause I will survive ignoring all this sadness

The most important is mission in this life
Before the other life after my death

Waiting you comments!!!
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Re: Broken

Postby Krisi » Sun Jun 29, 2008 10:36 pm

imad wrote:Broken life, empty soul
Can't see behind the sky
Can't go through this nightmare
Cause I've lost everything

To fight this madness, I must reborn
I'll fight this monster living inside of me
This broken life must be broken

I'm waiting for you
All the time I have
All the time you ned
You have to feel the hell I live in

You will see after that I'm just a pawn
Nothing more


I'll follow the train of life, and make a new one
Cause I will survive ignoring all this sadness

The most important is mission in this life
Before the other life after my death

Waiting you comments!!!


Very nice poem!

Welcome back Imad... :-)
click --> Happy Valentine!
always.



:-)
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Re: Broken

Postby sweets » Mon Jun 30, 2008 7:14 am

hi imad
it's so powerful i like it so much

and as krisi said WELCOME BACK

cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers
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Re: Broken

Postby imad » Mon Jun 30, 2008 8:37 am

Thank you sweets and krisi.
Yes that's right, I was absent for near a year bacause I was busy. I studied a long year to pass my exam, and it's very important to go to the university.
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Re: Broken

Postby sweets » Mon Jun 30, 2008 10:09 am

well, i hope for you to join university soon what are u going to study ???????????????
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Re: Broken

Postby imad » Mon Jun 30, 2008 10:30 am

I want study medicine.
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Re: Broken

Postby sweets » Mon Jun 30, 2008 5:18 pm

that's good may Allah gives u power it's so hard but if u like something it becomes easy

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Re: Broken

Postby AzizA » Tue Jul 01, 2008 10:27 pm

Oh^^!!;
Let me tell you that you're so senstive ,your poem makes me feel a lot of warm feelings 8-) ,
May GOD bless you
2 years later, I'll became a teacher of English;I'll get quite joy whenever I'll use my English^^
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