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Broken life, empty soul
Can't see behind the sky
Can't go through this nightmare
Cause I've lost everything

To fight this madness, I must reborn
I'll fight this monster living inside of me
This broken life must be broken

I'm waiting for you
All the time I have
All the time you ned
You have to feel the hell I live in

You will see after that I'm just a pawn
Nothing more


I'll follow the train of life, and make a new one
Cause I will survive ignoring all this sadness

The most important is mission in this life
Before the other life after my death

Waiting you comments!!!

imad wrote:Broken life, empty soul
Can't see behind the sky
Can't go through this nightmare
Cause I've lost everything

To fight this madness, I must reborn
I'll fight this monster living inside of me
This broken life must be broken

I'm waiting for you
All the time I have
All the time you ned
You have to feel the hell I live in

You will see after that I'm just a pawn
Nothing more


I'll follow the train of life, and make a new one
Cause I will survive ignoring all this sadness

The most important is mission in this life
Before the other life after my death

Waiting you comments!!!

Very nice poem!

Welcome back Imad...

hi imad
it's so powerful i like it so much

and as krisi said WELCOME BACK

cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers

Thank you sweets and krisi.
Yes that's right, I was absent for near a year bacause I was busy. I studied a long year to pass my exam, and it's very important to go to the university.

well, i hope for you to join university soon what are u going to study ???????????????

I want study medicine.

that's good may Allah gives u power it's so hard but if u like something it becomes easy

cheeeeeeeeers

Oh^^!!;
Let me tell you that you're so senstive ,your poem makes me feel a lot of warm feelings ,
May GOD bless you