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Daddy!

How naïve I was!
You endured me
Day in and day out!

I, your eldest,
Never gave a damn
Still, you were awesome.

Now,
I remember you;
With due respect.
Love you;
Every ounce.

When I think I am old enough
I understand you better!
Only, I have you not to share.
To share, how I feel about you.

Life is mystery daddy,
Sometimes full of life
Yet, with few emptiness.
But I remember you, nevertheless.

Oh! How I wish I had you
How I wish I can share things with you
How I wish I had enough time;
To show you how much I love you…

Pls give me comments on graammar/usage of words

it's the first time that i read here something about dads it seems u like him so much

thanks for sharing us
cheeeeeeeeers

Wauw .. very nice poem... Keep it up

great poem
dad deserves more than those pretty words

thank you

Dad deserves much much more, only i dont have him with me to give what he deserves. He passed away long back, and i miss him so much at every bounce in my life.

Very nice poem,cuz I think that only few people write poems about fathers,people more write poems about mothers .