hi
well what do u mean by(hope this is the last day, the soul of baskar is spread in the universe.) the word last refer to what ??????????????????????
nice to see u around
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We don't know, we love.
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It's really nice Shokin! believe me...shokin wrote:Hello everybody !
Krisi told me that this composition was nice. So... I post it here now.
I love you.
You love me.
But I don't know who you are.
And you don't know who I am.
I love you.
You love me.
But I don't know who I am.
And you don't know who your are.
I love you.
You love me.
But I don't know who we are.
And you don't know who we are.
[Vocabulary is a bit homogen. But syntax and sense are very logical. ]
Shokin
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Re: We don't know, we love.
sweet...sweets wrote:well ,i believe wthat iam doing is for myself i know it's baskar wish and iam following it
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Hello sweets,
Really I am glad to see here, Annna and Krishi admired your feeling by the way your answer
I welcome it and I more expect from the others (your friends) thoughts about your answer
Baskar's soul spread in the universe, why I said that?
he satisfied with your answer, after that his soul spread in the universe, I hope.
again I ask you to pray with your friends( Annaa, Krishi, Tora, Hardi,....) his soul to be rest in peace
can you do It?
murugan
Really I am glad to see here, Annna and Krishi admired your feeling by the way your answer
I welcome it and I more expect from the others (your friends) thoughts about your answer
Baskar's soul spread in the universe, why I said that?
he satisfied with your answer, after that his soul spread in the universe, I hope.
again I ask you to pray with your friends( Annaa, Krishi, Tora, Hardi,....) his soul to be rest in peace
can you do It?
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Re: We don't know, we love.
murugan wrote:Hello sweets,
Really I am glad to see here, Annna and Krishi admired your feeling by the way your answer
I welcome it and I more expect from the others (your friends) thoughts about your answer
Baskar's soul spread in the universe, why I said that?
he satisfied with your answer, after that his soul spread in the universe, I hope.
again I ask you to pray with your friends( Annaa, Krishi, Tora, Hardi,Dixie,...........) his soul to be rest in peace
can you do It?
murugan
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Re: We don't know, we love.
I'm glad to hear you ! even if you don't talk about my poem !
Shokin
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Nous sommes libres. Wir sind frei. We are free. Somos libres. Siamo liberi.
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Re: We don't know, we love.
Honestly, I don't know sweets love story (I just gave a remark on sweets replies to you) but, if Baskar is truly dead then I think it's really better to let his soul rest.murugan wrote:Hello sweets,
Really I am glad to see here, Annna and Krishi admired your feeling by the way your answer
I welcome it and I more expect from the others (your friends) thoughts about your answer
Baskar's soul spread in the universe, why I said that?
he satisfied with your answer, after that his soul spread in the universe, I hope.
again I ask you to pray with your friends( Annaa, Krishi, Tora, Hardi,....) his soul to be rest in peace
can you do It?
murugan
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Re: We don't know, we love.
But how Murugan knows Baskar ???
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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Re: We don't know, we love.
hi murgan, anna ,and krisi
well let baskar rest in peace
ANNA the sotry itself is tall sum up he was here and pass away later
well let baskar rest in peace
ANNA the sotry itself is tall sum up he was here and pass away later
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really? OH MY!!!sweets wrote:hi murgan, anna ,and krisi
well let baskar rest in peace
ANNA the story itself is tall sum up he was here and pass away later
I don't know your love story really... I just wish it was not opened here.
Goodluck to you sweets...
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Re: We don't know, we love.
krisi"eally? OH MY!!!
I don't know your love story really... I just wish it was not opened here.
Good luck to you sweets."
in fact yes it started here and ended here it's Allah will what we can do? for me i passed this experience in spite of how hard it was that you met someone even u do not see him well then passed sometimes it open's a gate for many thoughts to enter ur mind starting by WHAT IF
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I don't know your love story really... I just wish it was not opened here.
Good luck to you sweets."
in fact yes it started here and ended here it's Allah will what we can do? for me i passed this experience in spite of how hard it was that you met someone even u do not see him well then passed sometimes it open's a gate for many thoughts to enter ur mind starting by WHAT IF
cu
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