We don't know, we love.

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Re: We don't know, we love.

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hi
well what do u mean by(hope this is the last day, the soul of baskar is spread in the universe.) the word last refer to what ??????????????????????

nice to see u around

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shokin wrote:Hello everybody !

Krisi told me that this composition was nice. :mrgreen: So... I post it here now. :lol:



I love you.
You love me.
But I don't know who you are.
And you don't know who I am.

I love you.
You love me.
But I don't know who I am.
And you don't know who your are.

I love you.
You love me.
But I don't know who we are.
And you don't know who we are.



[Vocabulary is a bit homogen. :lol: But syntax and sense are very logical. :lol: ]



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It's really nice Shokin! believe me... :-)
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sweets wrote:well ,i believe wthat iam doing is for myself i know it's baskar wish and iam following it

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sweet... :-)
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Hello sweets,

Really I am glad to see here, Annna and Krishi admired your feeling by the way your answer

I welcome it and I more expect from the others (your friends) thoughts about your answer

Baskar's soul spread in the universe, why I said that?

he satisfied with your answer, after that his soul spread in the universe, I hope.

again I ask you to pray with your friends( Annaa, Krishi, Tora, Hardi,....) his soul to be rest in peace

can you do It?

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murugan wrote:Hello sweets,

Really I am glad to see here, Annna and Krishi admired your feeling by the way your answer

I welcome it and I more expect from the others (your friends) thoughts about your answer

Baskar's soul spread in the universe, why I said that?

he satisfied with your answer, after that his soul spread in the universe, I hope.

again I ask you to pray with your friends( Annaa, Krishi, Tora, Hardi,Dixie,...........) his soul to be rest in peace

can you do It?

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I'm glad to hear you ! even if you don't talk about my poem ! :lol: :lol: :lol:



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murugan wrote:Hello sweets,

Really I am glad to see here, Annna and Krishi admired your feeling by the way your answer

I welcome it and I more expect from the others (your friends) thoughts about your answer

Baskar's soul spread in the universe, why I said that?

he satisfied with your answer, after that his soul spread in the universe, I hope.

again I ask you to pray with your friends( Annaa, Krishi, Tora, Hardi,....) his soul to be rest in peace

can you do It?

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Honestly, I don't know sweets love story (I just gave a remark on sweets replies to you) but, if Baskar is truly dead then I think it's really better to let his soul rest.
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But how Murugan knows Baskar ???
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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hi murgan, anna ,and krisi

well let baskar rest in peace
ANNA the sotry itself is tall sum up he was here and pass away later
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sweets wrote:hi murgan, anna ,and krisi

well let baskar rest in peace
ANNA the story itself is tall sum up he was here and pass away later
:shock: really? OH MY!!! :shock:

I don't know your love story really... I just wish it was not opened here.

Goodluck to you sweets...
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krisi"eally? OH MY!!! :shock:

I don't know your love story really... I just wish it was not opened here.

Good luck to you sweets."

in fact yes it started here and ended here it's Allah will what we can do? for me i passed this experience in spite of how hard it was that you met someone even u do not see him well then passed sometimes it open's a gate for many thoughts to enter ur mind starting by WHAT IF :?:



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