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We don't know, we love.

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Re: We don't know, we love.

Postby sweets » Mon Jul 14, 2008 7:03 pm

hi
well what do u mean by(hope this is the last day, the soul of baskar is spread in the universe.) the word last refer to what ??????????????????????

nice to see u around

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Re: We don't know, we love.

Postby Krisi » Tue Jul 15, 2008 12:36 am

shokin wrote:Hello everybody !

Krisi told me that this composition was nice. :mrgreen: So... I post it here now. :lol:



I love you.
You love me.
But I don't know who you are.
And you don't know who I am.

I love you.
You love me.
But I don't know who I am.
And you don't know who your are.

I love you.
You love me.
But I don't know who we are.
And you don't know who we are.



[Vocabulary is a bit homogen. :lol: But syntax and sense are very logical. :lol: ]



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It's really nice Shokin! believe me... :-)
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Re: We don't know, we love.

Postby Krisi » Tue Jul 15, 2008 12:27 pm

sweets wrote:well ,i believe wthat iam doing is for myself i know it's baskar wish and iam following it

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sweet... :-)
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Re: We don't know, we love.

Postby murugan » Tue Jul 15, 2008 6:56 pm

Hello sweets,

Really I am glad to see here, Annna and Krishi admired your feeling by the way your answer

I welcome it and I more expect from the others (your friends) thoughts about your answer

Baskar's soul spread in the universe, why I said that?

he satisfied with your answer, after that his soul spread in the universe, I hope.

again I ask you to pray with your friends( Annaa, Krishi, Tora, Hardi,....) his soul to be rest in peace

can you do It?

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Re: We don't know, we love.

Postby murugan » Tue Jul 15, 2008 7:03 pm

murugan wrote:Hello sweets,

Really I am glad to see here, Annna and Krishi admired your feeling by the way your answer

I welcome it and I more expect from the others (your friends) thoughts about your answer

Baskar's soul spread in the universe, why I said that?

he satisfied with your answer, after that his soul spread in the universe, I hope.

again I ask you to pray with your friends( Annaa, Krishi, Tora, Hardi,Dixie,...........) his soul to be rest in peace

can you do It?

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Re: We don't know, we love.

Postby shokin » Wed Jul 16, 2008 1:08 am

I'm glad to hear you ! even if you don't talk about my poem ! :lol: :lol: :lol:



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Re: We don't know, we love.

Postby Krisi » Wed Jul 16, 2008 1:54 am

murugan wrote:Hello sweets,

Really I am glad to see here, Annna and Krishi admired your feeling by the way your answer

I welcome it and I more expect from the others (your friends) thoughts about your answer

Baskar's soul spread in the universe, why I said that?

he satisfied with your answer, after that his soul spread in the universe, I hope.

again I ask you to pray with your friends( Annaa, Krishi, Tora, Hardi,....) his soul to be rest in peace

can you do It?

murugan


Honestly, I don't know sweets love story (I just gave a remark on sweets replies to you) but, if Baskar is truly dead then I think it's really better to let his soul rest.
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Re: We don't know, we love.

Postby Annaa » Wed Jul 16, 2008 8:34 am

But how Murugan knows Baskar ???
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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Re: We don't know, we love.

Postby sweets » Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:09 am

hi murgan, anna ,and krisi

well let baskar rest in peace
ANNA the sotry itself is tall sum up he was here and pass away later
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Re: We don't know, we love.

Postby Krisi » Fri Jul 18, 2008 3:47 am

sweets wrote:hi murgan, anna ,and krisi

well let baskar rest in peace
ANNA the story itself is tall sum up he was here and pass away later


:shock: really? OH MY!!! :shock:

I don't know your love story really... I just wish it was not opened here.

Goodluck to you sweets...
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