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Pledge of Love in the Year of Snow

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Pledge of Love in the Year of Snow

Postby Rowiena » Wed Sep 17, 2008 3:14 pm

Hi everyone. I'm Rowena Chua, a new member here in the English club. I am a 3rd year college student studying to be a teacher with a major in English at the University of Santo Tomas, Philippines. I have always been fond of writing poems and so I decided to post one of my works here. I wrote it when I was in 3rd year high school. It is actually a sonnet. :-D Please enjoy! Any comments or questions will be greatly appreciated.

Thank you. {-:

Pledge of Love in the Year of Snow

Pages turned and flew to the year of snow
Sitting beside her I cry from within
I love her dearly, yet only I know
Time passes by but I never can win
I stay and weep locked in my cage of red
Place of deep slumber where dreams are just dreams
When the sleeping awakes to what it dreads
The curious night will swallow all its screams
The sand fades away and a new day comes
Swirls of colors will bring hope to the dawn
The song of the new morn to thee it hums
My true love for thee will never be gone
Under the same moon, same star and same sky
I pledge my love for her will never die
Last edited by Rowiena on Sun Sep 28, 2008 7:42 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Pledge of Love in the Year of Snow

Postby LoOost » Fri Sep 19, 2008 5:15 am

Hi,
I really like it speacially these,
Under the same moon, same star and same sky
I pledge my love for her will never die. {-;
SOME people MAKE the WORLD special JUST by BEING in IT...,
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Re: Pledge of Love in the Year of Snow

Postby Psixochka » Fri Sep 19, 2008 12:44 pm

Hi :-)

I like your sonet :-) Nice work, especially these:
" The sand fades away and a new day comes
Swirls of colors will bring hope to the dawn"
Scio me nihil scire. (Latin)
I know, that I know nothing. (By Socrates)
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Re: Pledge of Love in the Year of Snow

Postby Rowiena » Fri Sep 19, 2008 4:34 pm

LoOost wrote:Hi,
I really like it speacially these,
Under the same moon, same star and same sky
I pledge my love for her will never die. {-;


Really?!THANK YOU!:D its so nice to hear that people actually like my work. I feel all warm and giddy now! :lol:

Oh and also I have a trivia...I actually made this poem for my mom. :!!: haha. go figure ;p but then again its still applicable to a different kind of love {-;
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Re: Pledge of Love in the Year of Snow

Postby Rowiena » Fri Sep 19, 2008 4:38 pm

Psixochka wrote:Hi :-)

I like your sonet :-) Nice work, especially these:
" The sand fades away and a new day comes
Swirls of colors will bring hope to the dawn"


wow. THANK YOU! {-: I really like those lines too...it gives off such a strong feeling of hope and that life is really just an everyday thing that you should live and embrace as long as you have it... :-D
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Re: Pledge of Love in the Year of Snow

Postby Psixochka » Sat Sep 20, 2008 6:19 am

Rowiena wrote:
Psixochka wrote:Hi :-)

I like your sonet :-) Nice work, especially these:
" The sand fades away and a new day comes
Swirls of colors will bring hope to the dawn"


wow. THANK YOU! {-: I really like those lines too...it gives off such a strong feeling of hope and that life is really just an everyday thing that you should live and embrace as long as you have it... :-D


Not at all :-D I always respect and adore of people, who can write poems, tellings (especially good one :-) )... coz I can't do it :-( maybe in future I'll start do it... :-)
Go on in this way 8-)
Scio me nihil scire. (Latin)
I know, that I know nothing. (By Socrates)
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Re: Pledge of Love in the Year of Snow

Postby Rowiena » Sun Sep 28, 2008 7:27 am

Psixochka wrote:
Rowiena wrote:
Psixochka wrote:Hi :-)

I like your sonet :-) Nice work, especially these:
" The sand fades away and a new day comes
Swirls of colors will bring hope to the dawn"


wow. THANK YOU! {-: I really like those lines too...it gives off such a strong feeling of hope and that life is really just an everyday thing that you should live and embrace as long as you have it... :-D


Not at all :-D I always respect and adore of people, who can write poems, tellings (especially good one :-) )... coz I can't do it :-( maybe in future I'll start do it... :-)
Go on in this way 8-)


I didn't know how to write poems too before. You should try it sometime. It especially works for me when I have strong feelings or emotions that I want to let out and I do it through writing. {-; I know you can do it! Let me know of your works soon! :-D
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Re: Pledge of Love in the Year of Snow

Postby Psixochka » Sun Sep 28, 2008 12:25 pm

Rowiena wrote: I didn't know how to write poems too before. You should try it sometime. It especially works for me when I have strong feelings or emotions that I want to let out and I do it through writing. {-; I know you can do it! Let me know of your works soon! :-D


I agree with you :-) I prefer drawing, but for the last year I didn't draw anything :-( and I don't want to do it....
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Re: Pledge of Love in the Year of Snow

Postby teardrops » Thu Oct 16, 2008 1:50 pm

It is so good.
Raindrops,my teardrops. Falling from above,i dont have your love.
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Re: Pledge of Love in the Year of Snow

Postby osos » Sat Oct 18, 2008 11:13 am

Really NiCe ....... {-:
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