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AN ODE TO ????????????????

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AN ODE TO ????????????????

Postby sweets » Sun Mar 01, 2009 4:06 pm

too far .......................so close this my feeling foward you
to have more or stop it's a diffecult choice


first let me smell you oh my god
then have a kiss form you oh lallalallala
and finally have you all too smoothy full of passion and love


too close ............................. so far

now everything is finnished you finnished i finished no omre of you no more of me till i have anther peice of you or expect more of you


( now can you guess this odde to whome ??????????????????????????????????? )

share me your imaginatoin {-: {-:

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Re: AN ODDE TO ????????????????

Postby shakespear » Wed Mar 04, 2009 8:29 am

hello
i think its gd poem and can`t guess whom this poem to .first i thought its for ur lover, but it looks like a riddle.
plz tell me whom to.
i`m waiting 4 the answer.
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Postby sweets » Wed Mar 04, 2009 10:10 am

oh shki ur here {-:

well i can not tell who cuz. i don't see much replies :cry: :cry: is there no imaginatoin here or what :-| :-|
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Postby Krisi » Thu Mar 05, 2009 7:50 am

sweets wrote:too far .......................so close this my feeling foward you
to have more or stop it's a diffecult choice


first let me smell you oh my god
then have a kiss form you oh lallalallala
and finally have you all too smoothy full of passion and love


too close ............................. so far

now everything is finnished you finnished i finished no omre of you no more of me till i have anther peice of you or expect more of you


( now can you guess this odde to whome ??????????????????????????????????? )

share me your imaginatoin {-: {-:

cheeeeeeeeeeeeers


I'll guess for whom is that poem.

I think you wrote that for "shakespear". Am I correct sweets?
:-P
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Re: AN ODDE TO ????????????????

Postby sweets » Thu Mar 05, 2009 3:58 pm

NO YOU ARE NOT DEAR {-:
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Postby Krisi » Thu Mar 05, 2009 9:56 pm

sweets wrote:NO YOU ARE NOT DEAR {-:


So then I have no idea. :-)
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Postby sweets » Fri Mar 06, 2009 10:10 am

well it seems no one could guess ok i'll tell you

when i wrote this odde i wrote to the last piece of chocalte :lol: :lol: iwas so sad so i did not wait for next day i went out at that night and have anther one :-D
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Postby Psixochka » Sat Mar 07, 2009 10:05 am

hi
it is a good poem, but i am shocked that it is adressed to the piece of the chocolate :lol:
Scio me nihil scire. (Latin)
I know, that I know nothing. (By Socrates)
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Postby Krisi » Sat Mar 07, 2009 12:13 pm

sweets wrote:well it seems no one could guess ok i'll tell you

when i wrote this odde i wrote to the last piece of chocalte :lol: :lol: iwas so sad so i did not wait for next day i went out at that night and have anther one :-D


only one? :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby sweets » Sat Mar 07, 2009 4:18 pm

Psixochka wrote:hi
it is a good poem, but i am shocked that it is adressed to the piece of the chocolate :lol:


do you belive this but it deserve this {-:


Krisi wrote:
sweets wrote:well it seems no one could guess ok i'll tell you

when i wrote this odde i wrote to the last piece of chocalte :lol: :lol: iwas so sad so i did not wait for next day i went out at that night and have anther one :-D


only one? :lol: :lol: :lol:


is it too much :roll:
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