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IT IS MY HEART

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IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Tue Apr 14, 2009 9:57 am

It is my heart…….
Don`t ask how! Don`t ask me why!
It`s my soul liking to fly so high
Can`t you see me always I sigh?
I say see you but you used to say bye
___ ____ ____
Tell me the truth, don`t lie on me!
Did you still love me and keep my heart`s key?
Did you forget our vivid love at the sea?
Call me an` you`ll see me creep on knee
Isn`t enough to stay with me and …
Water our love tree?
___ ____ ____
TO BE CONTINUED
our life is like a night mare
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweets » Sun Apr 19, 2009 3:05 pm

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
shakespear

in my heart i have alot to talk joy sad

you know iam living this situation nowadays and i do not know wether shall we go on or what
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweets » Sun Apr 19, 2009 5:14 pm

to continue what i said before so i decide to go on in my life and you too stop begging for old days go on ur life
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Mon Apr 20, 2009 9:04 am

hi sweet
i know u`ll be the 1st one who makes comment on the poem and i`m not amazed 4 that ....although u were late but its ok
we debated this matter about sadness and happiness and i said it again we can`t live in a certain mood or state we r obliged to be sad or happy
thnx 4 the comment
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweets » Mon Apr 20, 2009 4:36 pm

hello

well iknow i am late but i did not come here for along time
about debate as you said we talked much about
i can not change ur feeelings or change ur mind

but i hope to find ur way soooooooooooon

cu
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Tue Apr 21, 2009 11:59 am

hi
i think u can`t chnge the idea but i feel happy to talk with u and to debate on anything thnx 4 ur prayer to me and i hope god bless u and get u rid from occupationg
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweets » Tue Apr 21, 2009 1:37 pm

same feelings towards you {-;
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Mon Apr 27, 2009 12:16 pm

hi and thnx
i think we r similar and have the same opinions axcept the subjects concerning with optinistic and pessimistic views
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby farah » Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:34 am

hi
where is the complete?
i will wait for it
c u
we have to live our life freely
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Sat Aug 08, 2009 10:03 am

hello
i don't know y i forget it
so i'll think about it hard and u'll c the complete just wait 4 me plz
gd luck
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