IT IS MY HEART

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shakespear wrote:It is my heart…….
Don`t ask how! Don`t ask me why!
It`s my soul liking to fly so high
Can`t you see me always I sigh?
I say see you but you used to say bye
___ ____ ____
Tell me the truth, don`t lie on me!
Did you still love me and keep my heart`s key?
Did you forget our vivid love at the sea?
Call me an` you`ll see me creep on knee
Isn`t enough to stay with me and …
Water our love tree?
___ ____ ____
TO BE CONTINUED
i can't complete it so i ask u to help me completing
thnx
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hi i wish i didn't issue this poem but its now part of me , of my personality.. so its ok..
i couldn't end it, i don't know why?
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hi....
i am not surprizing what i feel now........it is a poem of SHAKESPEARE...
be as slow as u like friend...we r Eagerly waiting.
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Dear Shakes,

The real love never fails

Why i call shakes when others are calling you shaki, because, You can shake her mind when you are in true

Be confident, your vibration can change when it is true

I wished to advice to Both of you don't try to play with each other

I can assure about her like she is a pure water, innocent, her heart is beautiful, so she is definately beautiful.If you going to cheat her, God will punish and you will feel it.

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I dont want to add anything to it Shakespear, It is all about your feelings so I am waiting for your comments and opinions.
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Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

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muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan

Yes Dear Murugan,
Please share it with me as well (the secrets of shakes). :lol:
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sweethuman wrote:
muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan
Yes Dear Murugan,
Please share it with me as well (the secrets of shakes). :lol:

i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way :evil: :evil: plz. respcet their privacy
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hi sweets
thnx 4 ur interest
have nice moments
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sweets wrote:
sweethuman wrote:
muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan
Yes Dear Murugan,
Please share it with me as well (the secrets of shakes). :lol:

i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way :evil: :evil: plz. respcet their privacy
That is your personal concept and idiology. Every human is born with different mind and ideas. A person should never forcefully implement ones concepts on others. Respect each and single idea of every member :twisted:
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i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way :evil: :evil: plz. respcet their privacy
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That is your personal concept and idiology. Every human is born with different mind and ideas. A person should never forcefully implement ones concepts on others. Respect each and single idea of every member :twisted:[/quote][/quote]

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i do not mind to express ur ideas i respcet that but i think that everybody have the right of privacy
that's all
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sweets wrote:i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way :evil: :evil: plz. respcet their privacy
That is your personal concept and idiology. Every human is born with different mind and ideas. A person should never forcefully implement ones concepts on others. Respect each and single idea of every member :twisted:[/quote][/quote]

sweethuman
i do not mind to express ur ideas i respcet that but i think that everybody have the right of privacy
that's all[/quote]

Fine. that is your own opinion.
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hello every one here
we don't have 2 b angry and plz every try 2 4get the past and try new day, don't seek the right or the false , just 4get all and try another topic and i hope we'll b loyal friends and like each other
thanks and i hope nice moments 4 all my friends here and there
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Thanks Shakes, :-) There is no smilie for the HUG or else I would have posted that as well :-P

Thanks for the nice comments. Be Happy
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hi sweethuman
thnx 4 ur soft msg and i hope 2 hear from u creative writings , i wana hear ur new poems
have nice moments and gdluck
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Dear Shakes,
Only upon your request, Read my post there in Creating Writing by the title (Love your Mom first and always). I hope you like it.

Thanks.
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dear friend
i've read ur poem and i think its so lovely and full of expressions
hope good luck and have lovely moments
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hi shak
why u did not answer my pm ??????
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hello
nice 2 meet u here and there
ramadan kareem
have nice moments in ramadan and i hope god forgives our sins
c u
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Allah akram dear
may Allah accsept ur prays and fast & forget our sins

takecare
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hi
thnx 4 that
c u
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shakespear wrote: Tell me the truth, don`t lie on me!
Did you still love me and keep my heart`s key?
Did you forget our vivid love at the sea?
Call me an` you`ll see me creep on knee
Isn`t enough to stay with me and …
Water our love tree?


Ur heart is doubting about her love, or what she feels for u. People always have a sixth sense when something is not right.
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Lara wrote:People always have a sixth sense when something is not right
now its psychology and u talked about sixth sense ...really i know little about it and i wish u talk us about it and make us know more about it
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Shakespear!!!
I meant with sixth sense that we always have a foreboding or presentiment of anything is wrong with the other person(in this case your heart doubts about her feelings; in the poem).
Also sixth sense is not only when u have a presentiment of wrong things, they also can be good thigs; It's a feeling that u know something will happen.

I hope u have understood what i said. C U :-D
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yeah
thnx 4 this explanation
have good day
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i hope u all be happy
i pray god keep u safe
have nice moments
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shakespear wrote:It is my heart…….
Don`t ask how! Don`t ask me why!
It`s my soul liking to fly so high
Can`t you see me always I sigh?
I say see you but you used to say bye
___ ____ ____
Tell me the truth, don`t lie on me!
Did you still love me and keep my heart`s key?
Did you forget our vivid love at the sea?
Call me an` you`ll see me creep on knee
Isn`t enough to stay with me and …
Water our love tree?
___ ____ ____
TO BE CONTINUED

i forgot it...i didn't complete it
any way
REGARDS
our life is like a night mare
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