IT IS MY HEART

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hi
thnx 4 that
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shakespear wrote: Tell me the truth, don`t lie on me!
Did you still love me and keep my heart`s key?
Did you forget our vivid love at the sea?
Call me an` you`ll see me creep on knee
Isn`t enough to stay with me and …
Water our love tree?


Ur heart is doubting about her love, or what she feels for u. People always have a sixth sense when something is not right.
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Lara wrote:People always have a sixth sense when something is not right
now its psychology and u talked about sixth sense ...really i know little about it and i wish u talk us about it and make us know more about it
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Shakespear!!!
I meant with sixth sense that we always have a foreboding or presentiment of anything is wrong with the other person(in this case your heart doubts about her feelings; in the poem).
Also sixth sense is not only when u have a presentiment of wrong things, they also can be good thigs; It's a feeling that u know something will happen.

I hope u have understood what i said. C U :-D
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yeah
thnx 4 this explanation
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i hope u all be happy
i pray god keep u safe
have nice moments
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shakespear wrote:It is my heart…….
Don`t ask how! Don`t ask me why!
It`s my soul liking to fly so high
Can`t you see me always I sigh?
I say see you but you used to say bye
___ ____ ____
Tell me the truth, don`t lie on me!
Did you still love me and keep my heart`s key?
Did you forget our vivid love at the sea?
Call me an` you`ll see me creep on knee
Isn`t enough to stay with me and …
Water our love tree?
___ ____ ____
TO BE CONTINUED

i forgot it...i didn't complete it
any way
REGARDS
our life is like a night mare
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