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It is my heart…….
Don`t ask how! Don`t ask me why!
It`s my soul liking to fly so high
Can`t you see me always I sigh?
I say see you but you used to say bye
___ ____ ____
Tell me the truth, don`t lie on me!
Did you still love me and keep my heart`s key?
Did you forget our vivid love at the sea?
Call me an` you`ll see me creep on knee
Isn`t enough to stay with me and …
Water our love tree?
___ ____ ____
TO BE CONTINUED

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
shakespear

in my heart i have alot to talk joy sad

you know iam living this situation nowadays and i do not know wether shall we go on or what

to continue what i said before so i decide to go on in my life and you too stop begging for old days go on ur life

hi sweet
i know u`ll be the 1st one who makes comment on the poem and i`m not amazed 4 that ....although u were late but its ok
we debated this matter about sadness and happiness and i said it again we can`t live in a certain mood or state we r obliged to be sad or happy
thnx 4 the comment

hello

well iknow i am late but i did not come here for along time
about debate as you said we talked much about
i can not change ur feeelings or change ur mind

but i hope to find ur way soooooooooooon

cu

hi
i think u can`t chnge the idea but i feel happy to talk with u and to debate on anything thnx 4 ur prayer to me and i hope god bless u and get u rid from occupationg

same feelings towards you

hi and thnx
i think we r similar and have the same opinions axcept the subjects concerning with optinistic and pessimistic views

hi
where is the complete?
i will wait for it
c u

hello
i don't know y i forget it
so i'll think about it hard and u'll c the complete just wait 4 me plz
gd luck

shakespear wrote:It is my heart…….
Don`t ask how! Don`t ask me why!
It`s my soul liking to fly so high
Can`t you see me always I sigh?
I say see you but you used to say bye
___ ____ ____
Tell me the truth, don`t lie on me!
Did you still love me and keep my heart`s key?
Did you forget our vivid love at the sea?
Call me an` you`ll see me creep on knee
Isn`t enough to stay with me and …
Water our love tree?
___ ____ ____
TO BE CONTINUED

i can't complete it so i ask u to help me completing
thnx

hi i wish i didn't issue this poem but its now part of me , of my personality.. so its ok..
i couldn't end it, i don't know why?

hi....
i am not surprizing what i feel now........it is a poem of SHAKESPEARE...
be as slow as u like friend...we r Eagerly waiting.

Dear Shakes,

The real love never fails

Why i call shakes when others are calling you shaki, because, You can shake her mind when you are in true

Be confident, your vibration can change when it is true

I wished to advice to Both of you don't try to play with each other

I can assure about her like she is a pure water, innocent, her heart is beautiful, so she is definately beautiful.If you going to cheat her, God will punish and you will feel it.

Murugan

I dont want to add anything to it Shakespear, It is all about your feelings so I am waiting for your comments and opinions.

Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan

muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan

Yes Dear Murugan,
Please share it with me as well (the secrets of shakes).

sweethuman wrote:

muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan

Yes Dear Murugan,
Please share it with me as well (the secrets of shakes).

i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way plz. respcet their privacy

hi sweets
thnx 4 ur interest
have nice moments

sweets wrote:

sweethuman wrote:

muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan

Yes Dear Murugan,
Please share it with me as well (the secrets of shakes).

i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way plz. respcet their privacy

That is your personal concept and idiology. Every human is born with different mind and ideas. A person should never forcefully implement ones concepts on others. Respect each and single idea of every member

i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way plz. respcet their privacy
[/quote]

That is your personal concept and idiology. Every human is born with different mind and ideas. A person should never forcefully implement ones concepts on others. Respect each and single idea of every member [/quote][/quote]

sweethuman
i do not mind to express ur ideas i respcet that but i think that everybody have the right of privacy
that's all

sweets wrote:i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way plz. respcet their privacy

That is your personal concept and idiology. Every human is born with different mind and ideas. A person should never forcefully implement ones concepts on others. Respect each and single idea of every member [/quote][/quote]

sweethuman
i do not mind to express ur ideas i respcet that but i think that everybody have the right of privacy
that's all[/quote]

Fine. that is your own opinion.

hello every one here
we don't have 2 b angry and plz every try 2 4get the past and try new day, don't seek the right or the false , just 4get all and try another topic and i hope we'll b loyal friends and like each other
thanks and i hope nice moments 4 all my friends here and there

Thanks Shakes, There is no smilie for the HUG or else I would have posted that as well

Thanks for the nice comments. Be Happy

hi sweethuman
thnx 4 ur soft msg and i hope 2 hear from u creative writings , i wana hear ur new poems
have nice moments and gdluck

Dear Shakes,
Only upon your request, Read my post there in Creating Writing by the title (Love your Mom first and always). I hope you like it.

Thanks.

dear friend
i've read ur poem and i think its so lovely and full of expressions
hope good luck and have lovely moments

hi shak
why u did not answer my pm ??????

hello
nice 2 meet u here and there
ramadan kareem
have nice moments in ramadan and i hope god forgives our sins
c u

Allah akram dear
may Allah accsept ur prays and fast & forget our sins

takecare

hi
thnx 4 that
c u

shakespear wrote: Tell me the truth, don`t lie on me!
Did you still love me and keep my heart`s key?
Did you forget our vivid love at the sea?
Call me an` you`ll see me creep on knee
Isn`t enough to stay with me and …
Water our love tree?

Ur heart is doubting about her love, or what she feels for u. People always have a sixth sense when something is not right.

Lara wrote:People always have a sixth sense when something is not right

now its psychology and u talked about sixth sense ...really i know little about it and i wish u talk us about it and make us know more about it
thnx

Shakespear!!!
I meant with sixth sense that we always have a foreboding or presentiment of anything is wrong with the other person(in this case your heart doubts about her feelings; in the poem).
Also sixth sense is not only when u have a presentiment of wrong things, they also can be good thigs; It's a feeling that u know something will happen.
I hope u have understood what i said. C U

yeah
thnx 4 this explanation
have good day

i hope u all be happy
i pray god keep u safe
have nice moments

shakespear wrote:It is my heart…….
Don`t ask how! Don`t ask me why!
It`s my soul liking to fly so high
Can`t you see me always I sigh?
I say see you but you used to say bye
___ ____ ____
Tell me the truth, don`t lie on me!
Did you still love me and keep my heart`s key?
Did you forget our vivid love at the sea?
Call me an` you`ll see me creep on knee
Isn`t enough to stay with me and …
Water our love tree?
___ ____ ____
TO BE CONTINUED

i forgot it...i didn't complete it
any way
REGARDS