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IT IS MY HEART

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 6:43 pm

shakespear wrote:It is my heart…….
Don`t ask how! Don`t ask me why!
It`s my soul liking to fly so high
Can`t you see me always I sigh?
I say see you but you used to say bye
___ ____ ____
Tell me the truth, don`t lie on me!
Did you still love me and keep my heart`s key?
Did you forget our vivid love at the sea?
Call me an` you`ll see me creep on knee
Isn`t enough to stay with me and …
Water our love tree?
___ ____ ____
TO BE CONTINUED


i can't complete it so i ask u to help me completing
thnx
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:19 pm

hi i wish i didn't issue this poem but its now part of me , of my personality.. so its ok..
i couldn't end it, i don't know why?
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby manal » Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:24 pm

hi....
i am not surprizing what i feel now........it is a poem of SHAKESPEARE...
be as slow as u like friend...we r Eagerly waiting.
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby muruganji » Sat Jul 09, 2011 6:45 pm

Dear Shakes,

The real love never fails

Why i call shakes when others are calling you shaki, because, You can shake her mind when you are in true

Be confident, your vibration can change when it is true

I wished to advice to Both of you don't try to play with each other

I can assure about her like she is a pure water, innocent, her heart is beautiful, so she is definately beautiful.If you going to cheat her, God will punish and you will feel it.

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweethuman » Sun Jul 10, 2011 7:40 am

I dont want to add anything to it Shakespear, It is all about your feelings so I am waiting for your comments and opinions.
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby muruganji » Fri Jul 15, 2011 6:05 pm

Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweethuman » Sun Jul 17, 2011 5:06 am

muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan



Yes Dear Murugan,
Please share it with me as well (the secrets of shakes). :lol:
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweets » Sun Jul 17, 2011 4:05 pm

sweethuman wrote:
muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan


Yes Dear Murugan,
Please share it with me as well (the secrets of shakes). :lol:



[color=#BF0000]i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way :evil: :evil: plz. respcet their privacy
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Sun Jul 17, 2011 10:01 pm

hi sweets
thnx 4 ur interest
have nice moments
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweethuman » Mon Jul 18, 2011 8:09 am

sweets wrote:
sweethuman wrote:
muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan


Yes Dear Murugan,
Please share it with me as well (the secrets of shakes). :lol:



[color=#BF0000]i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way :evil: :evil: plz. respcet their privacy
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That is your personal concept and idiology. Every human is born with different mind and ideas. A person should never forcefully implement ones concepts on others. Respect each and single idea of every member :twisted:
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