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DON`T BLAME ME

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby Lara » Fri Sep 09, 2011 1:26 am

SHakespear! Hi, it's a great poem, ur poems are always great, i think u r tired of hearing this hahah.
Well, i will tell u what i think; hmm as woman we dont like to know that there is anyone else in a relationship, so anygirl would say the same, we wanna be the only one for a guy. And it's common a guy complains about that, and then feels his girls is blaming him.
I hope u understand my point of view friend!! c u :)
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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Sat Sep 10, 2011 12:44 am

hi friend ....no i always be happy hearing ur comment either praising or critcism and i got ur point of view but i wana say here that the past of the ppl is not important ...if a man or a woman was loving and lived love story that's not a thing to be blamed ....koz we don't know the future. the important thing is the moment and the future koz we love someone and not respect this love by living additional love story with another...so i imagined that she blamed 4 past deeds and if i loyal to her now so she don't have to blame any more
i hope u got my idea
i wana thank u 4 this comment and praise and don't worry if u wanna criticize me...plz feel free i wana just hear ur comment
have nice days
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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby Lara » Sat Sep 10, 2011 3:03 am

Thanks Shakespear :) If i can i will post my comments about ur poems :D
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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Sat Sep 10, 2011 7:17 am

i'm eager to see ur comments
thnx
hope lovely day 2 u
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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 12:01 pm

its one of my best poems i wrote and i like it much
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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby farah » Sat Feb 04, 2012 11:38 am

HELLO...I LIKE THIS POEM AND I THINK ITS GEAT...ITS "BLAMING & EXCUSES" ....
CAN YOU MADE A POEM LIKE THIS???? I THINK YOU CAN NOT DO LIKE THIS AGAIN :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 05, 2012 10:40 am

thnx friend ....u r kind
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