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DON`T BLAME ME

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shokin » Thu May 14, 2009 6:37 pm

This poem is not to blame !
It's not a shame !
We remember your name !
It's only a great fame !



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Nous sommes libres. Wir sind frei. We are free. Somos libres. Siamo liberi.
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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Fri May 15, 2009 4:17 pm

jajajajajaj
hello shokin
long time ago we didn't meet so i'm very happy 2 meet u again
i think u comment on my poem with poem
its gd idea
thnx
c u
our life is like a night mare
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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shokin » Fri May 15, 2009 11:09 pm

Actually I blame you because of your sms language. :mrgreen:

shakespear wrote:jajajajajaj
hello shokin
long time ago we didn't meet so i'm very happy 2 meet u again
i think u comment on my poem with poem
its gd idea
thnx
c u


:lol: The real Shakespeare would not be proud of you. :lol:



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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Sun May 17, 2009 8:36 am

hi
i'm so sorry and i thank you on this note but trust me i used to use this writing and i wish to leave this custom.sorry again and forgive my fault.
c u {-:
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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby Psixochka » Sun May 17, 2009 1:06 pm

Hi, Shakespear!!!

I think your poem is really great!!! And I like it very much!!!
Especially I like the third part of the poem :-)

Good luck
Scio me nihil scire. (Latin)
I know, that I know nothing. (By Socrates)
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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Mon May 18, 2009 4:49 pm

thnx my friend and really u encoraged me and i like to meet u more in the future.good luck and thnx
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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby justme » Tue May 19, 2009 8:06 am

shakespear wrote:DON`T BLAME ME
I can feel you through this far distance
And can sense your soul sing and dance
Eve had tempted Adam to eat the forbidden apple
And you`re now blaming his spoiled sample
I`m like my ancestor full of lust
And always long to the lovely bust

Tears like pearls rose at your eyes
I couldn`t stand seeing them I became unwise
Your hand severely squeezed my heart
It`s your haunt, my valuable part
It holds your love, your name, your features
And you’ve thought you`re one of the weakest creatures…
When your tears rose at your eyes
But I saw them and became unwise

Truly I came from unknown time, unknown place
Like a damned ghost, I couldn`t show my face
I`m mere a name, a word, and may be a lie
And I know I gave you a painful sigh
I`ve tasted the pleasure like sea foam
But I`ve known pain engraved as doom -home
Don`t you know you`re my original substance?
And I’m now living with you lovely romance
So don`t mention Elena, Barbara or the other
And let`s forget, I think that`ll be better
Un-weak… although pearls dropped on that florid rose
Your hand squeezed my heart and made it pose

From the beginning I`ve said I’m worse than the devil
You`ve also had your own lust and needed me to fill
So you`ve quickly wide opened your door
And invited me to enter..I`m the moor
Why did u ever pick up libido -seed?
And planted it to satisfy your need?
You are like me, yield to your longing part
So don`t blame me, I have my soft heart

hi !
i just read your poem , you are good poet , i like your poetry style but i want mantion here that some time girls will be right but men can't understand her !
its just my opinion no arguments well best of luck here i am new so i would like that u feel dont mind ...
keep sharing with us !
Love is the master key that opens the gates of happiness.
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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Mon Jun 29, 2009 12:01 pm

hello
even u r new its ok koz we r all equall and there is no diffirence among us. u r welcome any time , anywhere.
i like to be ur friend
thnx
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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby farah » Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:08 am

oh
good poem but i think you are ladies'man (Don juan) koz u mention many women
i like it
c u
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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Sat Aug 08, 2009 10:27 am

hello
do u like to be one of them?
i'm waiting ur reply
c u
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