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i won't ask you

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Re: i won't ask you

Postby farah » Sun Aug 02, 2009 9:59 am

why u can not???????
you seem you love her??
we have to live our life freely
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Sun Aug 02, 2009 3:06 pm

hello
its private affairs
if u wanna know her name i have to ask her to accept that
c u
our life is like a night mare
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby farah » Sun Aug 02, 2009 3:52 pm

how long do i have to wait .
plz tell me directly
bye
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Mon Aug 03, 2009 8:04 am

hola
i can't tell u and u don't need to wait for that
if u wanna ask me about the poem and the style and the ideas
ok??
have nice moments
gd luck
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby farah » Tue Aug 04, 2009 10:03 am

thnankx
plz i want you to teach me some thing about poetry
thankx
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Sun Aug 09, 2009 6:42 am

hola
yea anytime
be careful
bye and gdluck
our life is like a night mare
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 6:30 pm

shakespear wrote:hello
i hope so koz u r like firebrand, ember under ashes needs blow of air to blaze so i'm the blow of air,u have to blaze and burn so plz show us ur pearls, ur lovely poems,
i have new poem , and ill issue it later if God permit.
c u and gd luck
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:29 pm

this is my poem:

Trust me it is true, I tell you no fibs
You're in my heart.. among the ribs
Inside my mind, control my sensations
You chase me, like shadow, to all stations
I don’t need to ask about you, my love
Our life put us on the torture curve
You stream inside veins with my blood
Like a stormy tornado and violent flood
You paralyze my limbs, like a snake-sting
And control me, you break my wing
You're like me lost here and there
And always lament the time in anywhere
Days come, days go, they steal happy times
I won’t ask you why you wrote rhymes
That I know utterly you don't know
But I'll still love you, don't you think so?


this poem has a connection with the last poem " we know" there is similarity between them
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