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In Sleepless Night

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In Sleepless Night

Postby justme » Sat Jul 04, 2009 9:42 pm

In sleepless night
i feel very alone
and be lost in endless exploration
i am missing you
missing our stupid fight
missing your arms
just touch your soul
at my need of sensation
want to erase all your worries
but you are far
my words can catch your heart
and remain you...
that a girl wating you
and thainking...
how to sleep without you
in sleepless night !
Love is the master key that opens the gates of happiness.
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Re: In Sleepless Night

Postby shakespear » Mon Jul 06, 2009 10:08 am

hellooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
really its good poem and i feel u will the best in this club so plz keep writring at this style koz i feel we r alike and i feel u touched my soul.
fantastic & wonderful
have nice day
our life is like a night mare
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Re: In Sleepless Night

Postby justme » Tue Jul 07, 2009 11:28 am

thank you shakespear defin i will write more..... :-D
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