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hello lovely friends
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hello player
really i like to contact u and know from u something about poetry so plz let's meet
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hi
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it's a tongue twister :D
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it has meaning beside the tongue twister...ok
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Shakes this poem i need to read it again and again to got well its meaning :-)
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hi
its hard to be pronounced
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shakespear wrote:Strange sonnet

Don't depart O dear! Days are delightful dreams.
Let's live lovely life, lick lips lustfully.
Buy beauty beside bliss, buy big bright beams.
Sing so soft songs, "Siren" start songs slightly.

* * *
You're yap yearn to yoke, years yarn the yellow
Hey hobo here! Have ye heeded hind?
Fight foes for freedom, fall down for fellow.
Can't you come closely? Can't you keep kind?

* * *
My mass's much, Magian maid made me mad.
Tiny titmouse touched torn temper timely.
Save sick single, sinking in sins, still sad.
Rude rook raped roe, rain ran round road roughly.
Can you guess my poem either good or bad?
Don't be shy please! And show your opinion frankly.
I THINK IT'S NOT VERY GOOD
ANY WAY, IT'S MY WORK
our life is like a night mare
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