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Why u have to say goodbye
Don't go baby without you I cannot imagine my life
Honey don't die your shock will cut my heart deep inside like a knife
Are you really gone?
Don't leave me I don't wanna be alone
I wanna wake up from this nightmare
I wanna have you back to everything we share

I can remember when you said:
(There are a lot of beautiful things in this world but they are not as your beauty)
This is too much for me baby and I can't believe this reality
Are you really gone?
Don't leave me I don't wanna be alone

All I see is a body but where is the soul
I wanna have you back baby I wanna those days I wanna have it all



Don't go baby without you I cannot imagine my life
Honey don't die your shock will cut my heart deep inside like a knife

Is it a poem or Rap? I ask because there are many "wanna/gonna" there.

i wrote it as a poem actualy
but someone told me that it seems like a song to him more than a poem

hello
i think the poem is good although the structure is not very good any way it has good idea and the exression is high
go ahead and gd luck