CAN YOU !!!!!!!!!!

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snice the heart says YES
but mind says NO

fix this if u can
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hello
whom will u follow heart or mind??
be careful before answer!
c u and goooooooooooooooooooood luck
our life is like a night mare
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when mind get tired
when heart is bleeding
when eyes never stop searching
it'll TAKE long time to decide
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hello
really u r skillful
i think u win
c u
we have to live our life freely
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thanx farah for ur words but u did not tell me win WHAT {-:

thanx for ur comment
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hello she wanna tell u that u won on me in this conversation don't u think so but i think u can't win on me
ok royal poetess
c u and good luck
our life is like a night mare
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hi dear friend how are u and how is rammdan with u shall u come and have eftar with us {-:

i know that i can not win on u but days for u days for me {-;

i wrote new odde last night and call it THE EDGE as i remmber i think u'll like it snice it's sad one
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hi
where is the poem and what are happening beteween you and shakespear??
you are lovers.
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helllo farah
farah wrote:hi
where is the poem and what are happening beteween you and shakespear??
you are lovers.
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i think it's out of ur intersed whether we are or not

sorry for being too harsh with you
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actually it's a perfect idea about happiness

but i like that view
especially ur description with the optimistic look
thank u {-:
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Well done
go ahead :-)
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thank you monaji
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it's nice to read ur old writes againe !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hi sweets,ur writing touches my heart
KEEP WRITING
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thanx for ur words
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