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A poetess

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A poetess

Postby virgo » Fri Sep 11, 2009 7:59 am

A poetess and my poetry is my grave
A poetess and my dreams is where I live
A poetess without you she don't need to be
She don't need to breathe
She can't even dream
You ended my life till now I can't believe
Still waiting for you
Even I'm sure you'll not be here
Still waiting for you
As a cruel wave in a sea
You broke me into pieces
Now I want to live in peace
But your spirit haunts my dreams
The reality is hard to see
Too hard to live and believe
Now I know what is reality?
I'm not denying any more
I admit I will forget
I admit you were the one
I admit you condemned my dreams
I admit there's no chance
I will die when I forget

is it good :?:
plz tell me ur real opinion[list=][/list]
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Re: A poetess

Postby Vega » Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:57 pm

I like it.
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Re: A poetess

Postby sweets » Fri Sep 11, 2009 6:35 pm

i like it much
yes this is poetess dreamy and harsh strong and weak take u to new world no one visit before and ur right when u said(I will die when I forget
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good job :-) keep on
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Re: A poetess

Postby virgo » Sat Sep 12, 2009 9:08 am

Xkalibur wrote:I like it.


thank u very much :)
i hope the next 1 will be better
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Re: A poetess

Postby virgo » Sat Sep 12, 2009 9:10 am

sweets wrote:i like it much
yes this is poetess dreamy and harsh strong and weak take u to new world no one visit before and ur right when u said(I will die when I forget
)

good job :-) keep on



thank u very much :)
i'm glad that u like it
n i hope the next 1 will be better
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Re: A poetess

Postby virgo » Sat Sep 12, 2009 9:12 am

Loletta wrote:I really love it..
please keep on writing>>> i want to read more from you

have anice day..


thank u so much :)
sure i'll keep on writing
n i hope u'll like the next 1 too
u too enjoy ur time
^__*
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Re: A poetess

Postby sweets » Sat Sep 12, 2009 6:25 pm

virgo wrote:
sweets wrote:i like it much
yes this is poetess dreamy and harsh strong and weak take u to new world no one visit before and ur right when u said(I will die when I forget
)

good job :-) keep on



thank u very much :)
i'm glad that u like it
n i hope the next 1 will be better


i hope that tooooooooooo {-:
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Re: A poetess

Postby virgo » Mon Sep 21, 2009 4:47 pm

thanx :)
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