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message to a ghost

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message to a ghost

Postby elmariachi » Thu Feb 25, 2010 11:08 pm

Will I ever look at the sky without seeing your eyes .
Or walking in the street and not imagining you holding my arm .
Or resting on my shoulders . laughing close to me
would you give me the chance to forget those moments
would you ever let me close my eyes and not seeing you
Like a passing cloud shaped like a heart
Just a questions to pass the night away from you
And a begs for the time to bring you back to me
Life is long and hard without a heart
Because You took mine when you left
What's the good of my tears if you couldn't see it.
What's the point of writing this if you can't feel it.
All I got in this cold long night
A lonely pen and a broken heart
So I asked my soul why you're with me
Why aren't you there protecting here for me
Why are you still with me . go away
Leave this cold body here and fly
Find here and stay close by
Don't mind this body he is done
Where is the fun when she is gone
That's what I am without her in my life
The lonely old man with the dark door
Screaming at the kids to leave him alone
While that is the only thing he has. Close to his home
Screams loud but inside he is saying
I love that noise that you're making
That's my future if you're going
Did I said enough to keep you with me
Did I reminded your heart of me
The beautiful moments he has
And all the good times we pass
I hope you don't read this message
Just listen to my heart breaths
In these lines where he bleeds
And I hope for my god the almighty
To join me to you in his heavens
So I forgot all this hard moments
And live for eternity with you
To redeem spending that life away from you
……………………………………………….
……………………………………………….
Heart beats : NON
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Re: message to a ghost

Postby sweets » Sat Mar 06, 2010 6:42 pm

i like ur poem

i feel speechless i can not say more
i need more time to tell u what i feel
generally good job
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Re: message to a ghost

Postby elmariachi » Sat Mar 06, 2010 7:53 pm

well.. sweets friend I'm the one who's speechless
thanx a lot for this sweet reply damn it's actually you
and your beautiful words. it was my first and last
I'd love if you have some additions or comment that may help.
be safe .... bless you
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Re: message to a ghost

Postby sweets » Sun Mar 07, 2010 5:49 pm

dear why to say it was my first and last???????

dnot upset that few send comments cuz. u write to release ureslf notto have their imprestions

so keep on cuz iam wating ur new poem

cu
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Re: message to a ghost

Postby elmariachi » Sun Mar 07, 2010 5:56 pm

no that wasn't cuz of the replies
I wrote it along time ago..
and I stopped since then
that's it ...
thanx a lot for caring .
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