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Ode from inside a jail

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby manal » Mon Feb 21, 2011 6:15 pm

hi,
i promise that u will read a new thing by me as soon as possible,and thank u for every thing.
have nice moments.
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Tue Feb 22, 2011 7:34 pm

hello
i tried to write but i can't , i know that i have something to write about but i can't now ...y??????? i don't know y ? may be its koz of not holding the pen. poems inside our souls are like volvano, u can't excite it unless magma and melted things inside it boil, in that time the volcano excite and its magma will flow , our soul is like the volcano and the poems are like this magma so we have not to oblige our selves to write a poem.
thnx and have lovely times
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby farah » Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:01 pm

Hellooooooooo
i read this comment in your new subject with some changs but i think it is good
good luck
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:17 pm

hello
yes that's right i issued it in separate topic.thnx 4 this soft comment and have nice moments
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby farah » Mon Feb 28, 2011 4:25 pm

HELLO
I WANT TO WRITE SOMETHING BUT I CANNOT PLEASE CAN U HELP ME IN WTITING A POEM?
MY REGARDS AND PLEASE READ MY LETTER IN YOUR BOX IN ENGLISH CLUB AND ANSWER ME.
THANKS
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Wed May 11, 2011 7:53 am

hi
listen
poems can't be written by friends and by helping one another, i know one can help another by encoruging but to teach him how to write a poem , really i don't know
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby xtragirl » Thu May 12, 2011 11:49 am

Hmm.. My comment for now, it's so good and touch my heart..
You know, I feel that I'm in that jail..
Imagine for what I will do..
So far with someone I love..
So sad..
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Sat May 14, 2011 6:26 am

hello
thnx .......
really u encouraged me with these lovley words and i hope u send more comments about other poems.......
u seem so good in this comment and i hope u try to write poems or any literatur writing
c u
my best wishes
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby Lara » Mon Aug 01, 2011 3:06 pm

hi :) Shakespear, i already told u i loved this poem. I hope you do not miss this great gift that you have to write poems, and God continue giving you lots of inspiration. Bye
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Fri Aug 05, 2011 7:08 am

hi lara and thnx
so am i
hope not to lose this gift of God...pray 4 me to get inspiration
thanx again
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