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safe shore

Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 10:48 pm
by shakespear
Safe shore
During day, I hold my candle look for him
I see nil that I need more than two eyes
Beside the eyes, we need heart soft, undim
You want the truth? So why do you tell lies
You want me good? You have to wear a trim
Sadist; you're aroused when your lover sighs
111111111111111
Search well, you'll find him close reply your pray
You needn't light, needn't eyes, you need your soul free
Release your soul and let it find the way
The Lord loves you, at once plant a love tree
The love will grow just water it aday
Leave your home now and come to his country
222222222222222
Your hair isn't golden, your eyes are not green
Southern, Northern…it isn't a matter yet
I feel your misery even it's unseen
You prevent me so give me needs and set
Bad past in mine, our future will be clean
Jealousy which kills you, you have to let
333333333333333
You always suspect me, you won't get rest
Rough sea of lust round me, hold please my hand
Save me, hold me to the shore, to your chest
To where sun with breeze, hillocks on soft sand
Take me with you to any place, east or west
You made me fly high, please let me now land
444444444444444

Re: safe shore

Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 10:56 pm
by Lara
shakespear wrote:You want the truth? So why do you tell lies
Shakespear :), as always you with your wonderful poems.
I agree with u, friendship is the most important thing in us, so if we wanna keep it, we always have to show the best of us, and of course sincerity makes friendship last forever.
Bye :)

Re: safe shore

Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 11:03 pm
by shakespear
hi friend
thnx 4 this lovely comment
we have to show the best of us to whom we like and respect...its our friendship....the strong relationship
i agree with u koz its my idea from the beginning
have good luck

Re: safe shore

Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 11:14 pm
by Lara
Yes, but not only to whom we like and respect, also with other people, because if i wanna people to respect me, i have to show my respect to them.

Re: safe shore

Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 11:19 pm
by shakespear
yes i think u r right
we have to be honest to all ppl
thnx 4 this correct
c u

Re: safe shore

Posted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 5:46 am
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:Bad past in mine, our future will be clean
i wana here correct small mistake
"is" in stead of "in"
Safe shore
During day, I hold my candle look for him
I see nil that I need more than two eyes
Beside the eyes, we need heart soft, undim
You want the truth? So why do you tell lies
You want me good? You have to wear a trim
Sadist; you're aroused when your lover sighs
111111111111111
Search well, you'll find him close reply your pray
You needn't light, needn't eyes, you need your soul free
Release your soul and let it find the way
The Lord loves you, at once plant a love tree
The love will grow just water it aday
Leave your home now and come to his country
222222222222222
Your hair isn't golden, your eyes are not green
Southern, Northern…it isn't a matter yet
I feel your misery even it's unseen
You prevent me so give me needs and set
Bad past is mine, our future will be clean
Jealousy which kills you, you have to let
333333333333333
You always suspect me, you won't get rest
Rough sea of lust round me, hold please my hand
Save me, hold me to the shore, to your chest
To where sun with breeze, hillocks on soft sand
Take me with you to any place, east or west
You made me fly high, please let me now land
444444444444444
thnx

Re: safe shore

Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 12:25 pm
by sweets
so now ur complianing of her Jealous i wonder wht she can do to satisfy you ??????

Re: safe shore

Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 10:48 am
by shakespear
she has to do the imposible things to satisfy her lover {-;

Re: safe shore

Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 11:19 am
by sweets
may be she is not feeling that her lover will do the same !!!!!!!!shall she give everthing 4 nothing??

Re: safe shore

Posted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 7:01 am
by shakespear
hi
how does she know that or she just feels...we can't take decisions just by feelings...we must be sure so we can make r8 decisions....thnx {-;

Re: safe shore

Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2011 9:14 am
by shakespear
hi all my friends here in this club ...i feel this club not as active as it was in the beginning so i wana ask every one here to activate this club and invite our friends those who interest in poetry and novel and other literature.....thnx

Re: safe shore

Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 11:44 am
by shakespear
hello all my friends
have nice moments
my regards

Re: safe shore

Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 3:46 pm
by Elisa
Thanks to Shakespear and all poets of this forum. I like your poems and I always read them.
They help me to improve my English and, at the same time, to feel good.

Re: safe shore

Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:45 am
by shakespear
Elisa wrote:Thanks to Shakespear and all poets of this forum. I like your poems and I always read them.
They help me to improve my English and, at the same time, to feel good.
its my pleasure u read my poems my loyal friend
have nice moments

Re: safe shore

Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:12 am
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:
shakespear wrote:Bad past in mine, our future will be clean
i wana here correct small mistake
"is" in stead of "in"
Safe shore
During day, I hold my candle look for him
I see nil that I need more than two eyes
Beside the eyes, we need heart soft, undim
You want the truth? So why do you tell lies
You want me good? You have to wear a trim
Sadist; you're aroused when your lover sighs
111111111111111
Search well, you'll find him close reply your pray
You needn't light, needn't eyes, you need your soul free
Release your soul and let it find the way
The Lord loves you, at once plant a love tree
The love will grow just water it aday
Leave your home now and come to his country
222222222222222
Your hair isn't golden, your eyes are not green
Southern, Northern…it isn't a matter yet
I feel your misery even it's unseen
You prevent me so give me needs and set
Bad past is mine, our future will be clean
Jealousy which kills you, you have to let
333333333333333
You always suspect me, you won't get rest
Rough sea of lust round me, hold please my hand
Save me, hold me to the shore, to your chest
To where sun with breeze, hillocks on soft sand
Take me with you to any place, east or west
You made me fly high, please let me now land
444444444444444
thnx
after correction
3rd stanza i corrected: bad past is mine....instead of....bad past in mine, i.e: "is" instead of "in"
thanks for all
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