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Elisa wrote:Thanks to Shakespear and all poets of this forum. I like your poems and I always read them.
They help me to improve my English and, at the same time, to feel good.

shakespear wrote:

shakespear wrote:Bad past in mine, our future will be clean

i wana here correct small mistake
"is" in stead of "in"
Safe shore
During day, I hold my candle look for him
I see nil that I need more than two eyes
Beside the eyes, we need heart soft, undim
You want the truth? So why do you tell lies
You want me good? You have to wear a trim
Sadist; you're aroused when your lover sighs
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Search well, you'll find him close reply your pray
You needn't light, needn't eyes, you need your soul free
Release your soul and let it find the way
The Lord loves you, at once plant a love tree
The love will grow just water it aday
Leave your home now and come to his country
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Your hair isn't golden, your eyes are not green
Southern, Northern…it isn't a matter yet
I feel your misery even it's unseen
You prevent me so give me needs and set
Bad past is mine, our future will be clean
Jealousy which kills you, you have to let
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You always suspect me, you won't get rest
Rough sea of lust round me, hold please my hand
Save me, hold me to the shore, to your chest
To where sun with breeze, hillocks on soft sand
Take me with you to any place, east or west
You made me fly high, please let me now land
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thnx