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AN ANGEL ON EARTH

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Re: AN ANGEL ON EARTH

Postby shakespear » Thu Sep 15, 2011 8:52 am

hi friend i am sure u can make much so i won't expect ...i'm sure u'll make much
have nice day
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Re: AN ANGEL ON EARTH

Postby shakespear » Thu Oct 13, 2011 11:24 pm

sweets wrote:maybe 'll post next week but do not expect much


u promised ....so where is ur post????
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Re: AN ANGEL ON EARTH

Postby shakespear » Thu Oct 13, 2011 11:53 pm

shakespear wrote:AN ANGEL ON EARTH

"Mention me" she said "if you like me a lot"
"And say a lovely poem on our story"
"Let me feel your love, do you care or not?"
"Add me to the high state of the glory"
"Keep me close, no water the rose will rot"
I've mentioned you and I won't be sorry


what means this??????????????????

think carefully plz...............
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Re: AN ANGEL ON EARTH

Postby Lara » Fri Oct 14, 2011 4:09 am

Hi again Shakespear!!!
hmmm....I think as she said "no water the rose will rot", she depends on u, perhaps u have in ur hands her heart, it depends on u, she depends on u. Also she said :"Let me feel your love, do you care or not?" here, i think she also wanna have ur heart, but that is up to you.
Am i right? :~: C U
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Re: AN ANGEL ON EARTH

Postby shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 5:03 am

listen
she asked to mention her ..this is in the first line..."Mention me" she said "if you like me a lot"
in the last line i said...I've mentioned you and I won't be sorry
sorry wt means that??????????????????
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Re: AN ANGEL ON EARTH

Postby Lara » Tue Oct 18, 2011 3:00 am

humm i thing i didnt get what u meant, but i'll try again... :roll:
Well in this case she wanned a proof, she needed a proof that you love her, that's why she asked that, and this is a nice proof of love that anyone can do for his/her beloved. But i think it's not neccesary that anyone asks his/her beloved to write a poem, because if his/her beloved loves her/him so much, it's his duty to write one, without asking it.
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Re: AN ANGEL ON EARTH

Postby shakespear » Tue Oct 18, 2011 4:11 am

hi
u ddn't get it again
in last line i confirmed that i mentioned her name so discover where i had mentioned her...

:-D can u?
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Re: AN ANGEL ON EARTH

Postby Lara » Tue Oct 18, 2011 5:38 pm

hmmmm... :roll: the only word which is a name is "Angel", yes the name u mentioned is Angel. I hope to be right...like the Robbie Willians song; "Angels" :-D
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Re: AN ANGEL ON EARTH

Postby sweets » Tue Oct 18, 2011 7:19 pm

lara did you his angel or not yet????????????????????????
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Re: AN ANGEL ON EARTH

Postby shakespear » Tue Oct 18, 2011 10:32 pm

i mentioned another name and its the same but another word...
ok dont worry about that...
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