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how
Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 5:07 pm
by sweets
(this is m first poem after almost a year .. ..)
how hard to cry without tears
how hard to go without return
how hard to feel annoyed and no one to share
how hard to speak voiceless ..
to live and wait your death
to live inside bubble
without freind ..without lover
and feel that joy will never come
discovered you get a pain and no one to cure
how hard to say hi ..... how easy to say bye
Re: how
Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 9:24 pm
by shakespear
to live and wait your death
to live inside bubble
without freind ..without lover
and feel that joy will never come
welcome friend...its marvelous poem and i wana congratulate u koz u come back.....
really lovely lines and i hope to write more and more...have lovely times
Re: how
Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2011 10:11 am
by sweets
thanx dear but i do not knw i feel it needs much to work on what do you think ?
Re: how
Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2011 6:59 pm
by muruganji
Dear Sweets
No use
A female's tears can thin (dilute) a stone- It is Indian Proverb
Do not look back, go forward, bright future is waiting for you
Get Last
Elder Brother Muruganji
Re: how
Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 4:08 pm
by sweets
muruganji wrote:Dear Sweets
No use
A female's tears can thin (dilute) a stone- It is Indian Proverb
Do not look back, go forward, bright future is waiting for you
Get Last
Elder Brother Muruganji
you can not change my mind
Re: how
Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2011 6:19 pm
by Lara
sweets wrote:
how hard to cry without tears
how hard to go without return
how hard to feel annoyed and no one to share
how hard to speak voiceless ..
almost everything on earth is inevitable,everything has its consequences whether good or bad.
Nice poem :)
Re: how
Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 5:42 am
by sweets
thanx dear 4 ur comment have a sweet day
Re: how
Posted: Sat Sep 24, 2011 5:20 pm
by sweets
no more comments or wht?????????
Re: how
Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2011 3:35 am
by shakespear
hi friend
sometimes simple words can express lots of meanings and sometimes we don't speak but we show lots of meaning...
have nice moments
Re: how
Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2011 4:24 am
by sweets
i do not knw when u check our old poems (you and me ) we had much to comment to talk sometimes we comment in poetry we were like fire & butterfly do you remember those days i really miss them at least i found a reason to write to comment a sense of challenge
i guess u got bored or sometimehing like that
wht do you think??????
Re: how
Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:08 am
by shakespear
i can't live without poetry and poems and i didn't feel bored and i miss those past day more than u koz i find my activness in comments but u r often not here and i tried to see ur comments and poems but nothing...anyway i hope i can see ur comments and poems ....those strong poems as i knew u ..active and poetess....
Re: how
Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2011 7:45 am
by sweets
u knw that iam missing that more than u so let us have a fresh start with new poetic flames let us fire this fourm as we were waiting 4 u
Re: how
Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2011 8:59 am
by shakespear
ok sweets
Re: how
Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2011 6:08 am
by sweets
heyyyy
i won't post any new poem till i read urs so huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuury up